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My town is a lot of bicycles Hi everyone. My town is a lot of bicycles. Today photo is bicycle-parking space around the station. There are also two storey parking area in front of my house. It is always full. I went to the cycling today. It was happy though was about one hour.

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My town is a lot of bicycles


Hi everyone.


My town is has a lot of bicycles in it. (or "There are a lot of bicycles in my town.")
Today's photo is a bicycle-parking space around the station.

There are is also a two storey parking area in front of my house.
It is always full.

I went to the cycling today.
It was happy fun (or "It made me happy") though it (only) lasted about one hour.

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すごい!自転車がたくさんあるよね!何千あると思いますか?
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My town has is a lot of bicycles


Hi everyone.


My town has is a lot of bicycles.
Today's photo is the bicycle-parking space around the station.

There is also are also a two storey parking area in front of my house.
It is always full.

I went to the cycling today.
It was good fun, happy though however I was only doing it for about one hour.


"Storey" is British English, "story" is American. Australian English is random parts of both British and American :)
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My town have  is a lot of bicycles


Hi everyone.


My town have  is a lot of bicycles.
Today photo is bicycle-parking space around the station.

There are also two storey parking area in front of my house.
It is always full.

I went to the cycling today.
It I  was happy though was  it last about one hour.
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To Maria: Маша жжешь :)
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Good God! I wish we had such parkings in Saint Petersburg!

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