sanae's notebook entry: May 18, 2011
Ideas and Opinions Blogging(Week3)
Babe book characters are almost animals.
For example, mouses,ducks,sheeps,horses,and so on.
I introduce about story so far.
Babe met dangerous two dogs.
But,became are friend at last......
I have read 23 pages.
I like this book!
And I think this book is not difficult.
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sanae's notebook entry: May 18, 2011
Ideas and Opinions Blogging(Week3)
The characters in the book "Babe" are mostly animals.
For example, mice, ducks, sheep, horses, and so on.
I will tell you about the story so far.
Babe met two dangerous dogs, but they became friends in the end......
I have read 23 pages.
I like this book!
And I think this book is not difficult.
(I took this method of correcting from someone who previously corrected your work.)
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The plural of mouse is mice. There is no plural for sheep.
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Have you seen the movie?
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sanae's notebook entry: May 18, 2011
Ideas and Opinions Blogging(Week3)The characters in the book Babe are almost animals. For example, mouses, ducks, sheep, horses, and so on. I will introduce the story so far.
Babe met two dangerous dogs. But, became their friend in the end.
I have read 23 pages. I like this book! And I don't think this book is difficult.
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