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First notebook entry: Introducing myself I like meeting peple.I like talking about interesting things. So I'd like to have new friends. My hobby is reading.I want to come to understand the book of the foreign language. And I want to travel around the world,I want to utilize English.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I like meeting people.I and like talking about interesting things. so I'd like to have make new friends.

so = （だ）から、（な）ので、のために

人と会うのと面白い話を話すのがすきですから新しい友達を取りたいです。
My hobby is reading.I want to come to understand the book of the a foreign language book.
And I also want to travel around the world,I want to utilize my English.

#Good job!  Keep up the hard work! 頑張って！

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

I like meeting people.I like talking about interesting things. So I'd like to have new friends.
My hobby is reading. I want to come to understand the book of the foreign language books.
And I want to travel around the world, so I want to utilize English.

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Guide: Red=訂正|Blue=推敲|Yellow=わかり難い

がんばります！

 

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