climate change It's a big topic nowadays to talk about global warming. There are a lot of things I don't understand. . I don't think we can say that there is a global warming for every state in the sa

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climate change It's a big topic nowadays to talk about global warming. There are a lot of things I don't understand. . I don't think we can say that there is a global warming for every state in the same way. In July we sometimes have 14 degrees celsius as we can experience in (the) winter. Sure- there is something going on but in my opinion we have to call it a* chaotic climate change*. In Denver for example-about a year ago- they had a beautiful summerday. When my friend got up the next morning, he was surprised to see snow in his backyard! That's kind of creepy, isn't it?

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climate change

It's a big topic nowadays to talk about global warming. There are a lot of things I don't understand. I don't think we can say that there is a global warming for every state in the same way global warming affects every country the same way. In July we sometimes have 14 degrees celsius, as we can experience in (the) winter the same as what we would normally experience in winter.
Sure- there is something going on but in my opinion we have to call it a* chaotic climate change*.
In Denver for example-about a year ago- they had a beautiful summer day. When my friend got up the next morning, he was surprised to see snow in his backyard! That's kind of creepy, isn't it?

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This is well-written and the topic is an interesting one! I'm writing this as I'm listening to a crazy downpour of rain in the background. We've never seen so much rain in Ottawa as this spring and summer...the river was higher than it's ever been before and hundreds of homes were flooded. "Chaotic climate change" is a good way of putting it! Hopefully we humans will change our ways fast enough!!!!!

Climate Change

It's a big topic nowadays to talk about global warming. There are a lot of things I don't understand. . I don't think we can say that there is a global warming for every state in the same way. In July we sometimes have 14 degrees celsius as we can experience in (the) winter.
Sure- there is something going on but in my opinion we have to call it a* chaotic climate change*.
In Denver for example-about a year ago- they had a beautiful summerday. When my friend got up the next morning, he was surprised to see snow in his backyard! That's kind of creepy, isn't it?

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I would always suggest capitalizing the title of something like this.

I also agree with the other corrections made.

Thanks Giancarlo! In conversations we talk about the crazy weather. We don't have to call it that but I needed another sentence :-) what else would you change?? Would you please let me know?

I see a few things that I'd change but the ones that jump right out at me are: I wouldn't compare July & winter. I'd compare months to months & seasons to seasons. "We have to call it a chaotic climate change". Why do we have to or did you mean that we don't have to call it that?

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