The Description of My Bedroom My room is quite big. It has a window pointed to the south, so there is more light in the room in the morning than in the evening. On the floor, there is a grey carpet. T

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Karel Kohout

The Description of My Bedroom My room is quite big. It has a window pointed to the south, so there is more light in the room in the morning than in the evening. On the floor, there is a grey carpet. That's convenient when I walk barefoot, on the other hand, having a wood floor would be more practical for cleaning. Since it's a bedroom, I have a bed there, which is almost in the middle of the room. Between the bed and the nearest wall to it, there is a sofa. So, if I want, I have more place to lay; it's almost like a double-bed. There is also a desk in the room with a computer on it. That is actually the computer I'm using just now. While typing this text, I'm sitting on a chair. In the room, there is also an armchair, which I use as a place for clothes I currently wear. Other clothes are stored in a big grey wardrobe with a mirror on it. And I forget to mention that on the ceiling, there is a chandelier and the walls are green.

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The A Description of My Bedroom

My room is quite big. It has a window facing pointed to the south, so there is more light in the room in the morning than in the evening. On the floor, there is a grey carpet. That's convenient when I walk barefoot. On the other hand, having a wooden floor would be more practical for cleaning.
Since it's a bedroom, I have a bed there, which is almost in the middle of the room. Between the bed and the nearest wall to it, there is a sofa. So, if I want, I have another more place to lie lay; it's almost like a double-bed. There is also a desk in the room with a computer on it. That is actually the computer I'm using right just now. While typing this text, I'm sitting on a chair. In my the room, there is also an armchair, which I use as a place for the clothes I have worn/want to wearcurrently wear. My other clothes are stored in a big grey wardrobe with a mirror on the outside it.
And, I forgot to mention that on the ceiling, there is a chandelier and the walls are green.

The A Description of My Bedroom

My room is quite big. It has a window pointed to the south, so there is more light in the room in the morning than in the evening. On the floor, there is a (<--If the carpet is a single mat, this would be correct. However, your since your floor is covered in gray carpet, you would remove the indefinite article.) grey carpet. That's convenient when I walk barefoot; on the other hand, having a wooden floor would be more practical for cleaning.

Since it's a bedroom, I have a bed there, which is almost in the middle of the room. Between the bed and the nearest wall to it, there is a sofa, so, if I want, I have more another place to lay down; it's almost like a double-bed. There is also a desk in the room with a computer on it. That is actually the computer I'm using just right (<--"Just now" is used for the immediate past, whereas "right now" is used for the present.) now. While typing this text, I'm sitting on a chair. In the room, there is also an armchair, which I use as a place for clothes I currently wear. Other clothes are stored in a big grey wardrobe with a mirror on it.
And (<--Although there is no rule against it, it's best not to start sentences with conjunctions.) I forgot (<--This is past tense because you're mentioning it now.) to mention that, on the ceiling, there is a chandelier, and the walls are green.

Excellently written, Karel. Your English is very strong, and any mistakes you made were minor. Keep up the good work! =)

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