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advantages and disadvantages the internet has brought to young people. Some people believe that Internet is bad, other people believe that It is fantastic. However everyone must agree that now it is hard to image the world without Internet. In this essay I look at the good and bad side of Internet. On the one hand, these connections can help with a variety of thing such as: finding a romance or seeking a new job. Moreover, we can access news in real time and comment on it. Futhermore we can save time doing certaing things, for example we can shop online or do our banking online. On the other hand, Intenet in special social network are producing Cyberbullying. More and more young people suffer from thys type of harassment. In addition Internet could be addictive, every day more and more people spend hours and hours in front of the screen of a computer or mobilphone. Moreover, many young people are vulnerable to misleading advertising being offered on the web. To sump up, IInternet has made easier our lifes, however it can turn into something quite dangerous in the way we use them.

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Advantages and disadvantages the internet has brought to young people.

Some people believe that the Internet is bad, while others people believe that it It is fantastic. However , everyone  will agree that now  at this moment,it is hard to imagine image the world without the Internet. In this essay, I will look at the good and bad side positive and negative side of the Internet.


On the one hand, these connections can help with a variety of thing such as looking for finding a romance or seeking a new job. Moreover, we can access news in real time and provide comments directly. Furthermore, we can save time doing certaing things, for example we can shop online or do our banking online  such as shopping and banking online.


On the other hand, the Intenet in special social network are producing  has caused Cyberbullying. More and more young people suffer from this type of harassment. In addition, Internet could be addictive.  eEveryday, more and more people spend hours and hours  (more people are spending excessive hours )in front of the screen of a computer or mobile phone. Moreover, many young people are vulnerable to misleading advertising being offered advertisements on the web.
To sum up, the Internet has made easier our lives easier.  However, it can turn into something quite dangerous in the way we use them.  could also adversely impact us by the way we use it.

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