No corrections :-(
Okay, I haven't had one correction yet. Only in a question. And I feel so terrible for being so wrong. But hey, everyone gotta learn, dont they? Well, I REALLY want to learn, so would you PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE write a correction to this?
I have a new goal, and that is making other people happy. Aint that a beautiful goal or what? At least I look up to people who live for making other people happy.
So now... CORRECT ME! or... if you seek amy... KIDDING, dont do that. Correct me. Okay? Bye.
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No corrections :-(
I have a new goal, and that is to mak
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1. Without the word, "please" and having that phrase IN ALL CAPS implies not only you are shouting but a command to others. This does not bode well with English speakers. I can see that you understand on the use of capitalization to project your feelings, so I would think that this faux pas was committed unintentionally.
2. I could not decipher the word, "amy". So I did not correct the content but the grammatical aspects of it.
3. Again you are acting as if you are the queen giving orders.
4. Since your piece is written in slang and you have made use of smilies in your essay title, you should have another smiley here to tone down your emotion. Maybe because of your tone, no one wants to correct your writing?
Normally I advise beginners never to write in slang but the proper way unless you know what you are writing. Otherwise you come across as an uneducated person. You can write a light hearted one without the use of slang. For example, here's your rewrite in a light and informal tone without resorting too much slang. Just a mere splinkling will make the piece comes to life.
No Correction
Stil haven't receive a single correct yet! Only an edit in the question and answer section. Boo hoo! I feel so unwanted. Everyone needs to learn. Right? My heartaches for this learning. So could you PLEASE PLEASE correct my English? Pretty please :)
I have a new goal and that is making other people feel happy. Isn't that a beautiful goal to attain? I have admiration for those who like to make others feel happy. I would be very happy if you can correct my English.
Thanks again, byeeeeeeeee!
Thanks again, byeeeeeeeee!
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You just have to be patient :). Correcting someone's English is difficult. Not only one has to correct what grammatical errors, spelling mistakes there are, one has to guess what the writer was saying. Also a good correction needs explanation why it is corrected this way and to instill cultural issues. This last issue is especially magnified when two languages do not share a common heritage such as English and Chinese.
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