A conversation ( Please help me correct this notebook, thank you )
This morning, I had a conversation with a friend. We're living 2 different cities so when have free time, we usually chat over Facebook.
A: Hello there, how are you doing ?
B: I'm doing well , thanks. How about you ?
A: So so...
B: Oh, what's up ?
A: My city had a downpour this morning. I got wet and took more than 2 hours to went company. And then I was late.
B: I know. Anyway, at least you went to company. I've heard that lots of vehicles were broken and couldn't move anymore.
A: That's so terrible. I'm so lucky if compare with others. What 's the weather like in your city ?
B: It's completely different than your city. It's quite hot, like a furnace. The average temperature reaches about more 35 degrees. I wish it rained a little bit to easy the kind of weather.
A: Because of being late this morning so I just have 15 mintues to take a break. It's almost over. I have to work back. Talk with you later. Bye
B: It's Ok, see you.
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A conversation (Please help me correct this notebook entry. Thank you.)
This morning, I had a conversation with a friend. We're living in two different cities, so when have free time, we usually chat over Facebook.A: Hello there, how are you doing? (<--There is no space before a punctuation mark.)
B: I'm doing well, thanks. How about you?
A: So so...
B: Oh, what's up?
A: My city had a downpour this morning. I got wet and took more than two (<--Whole numbers less than twelve are almost always written as words.) hours to went get to my company, and then because of that, I was late.
B: I know see. (<--We react with "I know" if we already knew the information, but we react with "I see" if the information is new to us.) Anyway, at least you went got to the company. I've heard that lots of vehicles were broken and couldn't move anymore.
A: That's so terrible. I'm so lucky if compared with others. What 's the weather like in your city?
B: It's completely different than from your city. It's quite hot, like a furnace. The average temperature reaches about more than 35 degrees. I wish it rained a little bit to ease the this kind of weather.
A: Because of being I was late this morning, so (<--English doesn't require this second conjunction, since the first one "because" is already there.) I just have 15 minutes to take a break. It's almost over. I have to get back to work back. Talk with you later. Bye!
B: It's okay. See you!
Nicely translated, Min! Your English is good! Any mistakes made can be corrected with more practice. Keep it up! =)
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A conversation ( Please help me correct this notebook, thank you )
This morning, I had a conversation with a friend. We're living two different cities so when have free time, we usually chat over Facebook.A: Hello there, how are you doing ?
B: I'm doing well , thanks. How about you ?
A: So so...
B: Oh, what's up ?
A: My city had a downpour It poured rain in my city this morning. I got wet, and took more than two hours to get to work, so I was late.
B: I know. Anyway, at least you went to company work. I've heard that lots of vehicles were broken and couldn't move anymore.
A: That's so terrible. I'm so lucky compared to other people. What's the weather like in your city ?
B: It's completely different than your city. It's quite hot, like a furnace. The average temperature reaches more than 35 degrees. I wish it rained a little bit to easy the kind of weather ease the temperature.
A: Because of being late this morning, so I just I had 15 minutes to take a break. It's almost over. I have to work back go back to work. Talk with you later. Bye
B: It's ok, see you.
Excellent writing. Keep up the great work!
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