2017/6/14 Diary Entry

The city where I live, Taipei City, is always humid, especially in/during May and June. Because of the stationary cold air masses, it's raining very heavily now and will, hopefully, only last until next week. The weather front forms at this time of year when the moist air over the Pacific meets the cooler continental air mass. I sincerely hope that the plum rain season (梅雨 meiyu) can leave quickly as the humidity makes my skin feel uncomfortable and sensitive. It also prevents the clothes from not drying easily. I truly miss seeing the sunny days!

(Please correct me if I’ve made any mistakes. Thanks!)

Hello, Miss Wu.  Good job! While I’ve changed a few things in order to allow your sentences to sound and read more naturally to my native ears, there honestly wasn’t much to correct. However, be sure to leave a space after a period (.) The word “raining” only has one “n.” The term “plum rain” is not well-known here in the U.S. or other places, so always consider explaining local terms like that whenever you use them in your writing. The word “It” needs the word “make” to be “makes” in order to have “Subject-Verb Agreement.” I hope that this helps you. J.