walking enjoyment I like walking and I walk to various places like Kamakura, Yokohama, Shibuya, Ebisu, and others. Every town has its own characteristics. When I walk, I can see them differently than

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walking enjoyment I like walking and I walk to various places like Kamakura, Yokohama, Shibuya, Ebisu, and others. Every town has its own characteristics. When I walk, I can see them differently than when I am in the car or in the train. It is a lot of fun! ウォーキングの楽しみ私はウォーキングが好きで、色々な場所に歩いていきます。どの街にもそれぞれ特徴があります。歩いていると、車や電車に乗っているときとは違う視点から街をとらえることができます。それはとても楽しいです。 Would you check and correct my English? ＊日本語で散歩はのんびり歩くイメージで割合高齢者が好む印象、ウォーキングはスポーツ的に、速く・たくさん歩くような語感です。英語ではその違いをどう表現するのか気になりました。 How do you say 散歩 and ウォーキング in English?

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Walking enjoyment [or: Enjoyment of walking]

I like walking and I walk to various [or: many] places like [or: such as] Kamakura, Yokohama, Shibuya, Ebisu, and others so on.
Every town has its own characteristics and when I walk, I can see them differently [or: more clearly] than when I am in the car or in on the train. [1]

It is a lot of fun!

[1] When we referred to a means of transport that is made up of a 'platform' (often bigger forms of transport) we use 'on', "on the bus", "on the train", "on the plane", etc.

ウォーキングの楽しみ
私はウォーキングが好きで、色々な場所に歩いていきます。
どの街にもそれぞれ特徴があります。
歩いていると、車や電車に乗っているときとは違う視点から街をとらえることができます。
それはとても楽しいです。

Would you check and correct my English?

＊日本語で散歩はのんびり歩くイメージで割合高齢者が好む印象、ウォーキングはスポーツ的に、速く・たくさん歩くような語感です。英語ではその違いをどう表現するのか気になりました。
How do you say 散歩 and ウォーキング in English?

Hi Wendy! Thank you for your advice! 勉強になりました。ありがとうございます！

Hi Ryu, 散歩, is called 'strolling around' in English. It is when you are walking around (for example in a garden) ウォーキング is 'walking' (which you can use for 'walking to work') ランニング is 'running'. Bye!

ありがとうございます！ Thank you very much to check my English!

Hi! You did a really good job! I don't see any mistakes except for one suggestion: use 'others' instead of 'so on' in this sentence: I like walking and I walk to various places like Kamakura, Yokohama, Shibuya, Ebisu, and so on. Best of luck!

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