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Diary of one day ある日の日記 It's the rainy season now.But it was cloudy today. And there was a light shower in the afternoon. At that time, I was practicing to make a green tea for tea ceremony. When I hard sounds of rain, I was surprised. After the lesson, I went to eat beef curry-rice for lunch at cafe. I got home with feeling my fatigue. I made meals and ate. And then, I watched TV drama and learned English. I will learn English also tomorrow. 梅雨の季節です。 今日は曇りでしたが、午後、にわか雨がふりました。 その時、私は茶道のお点前のお稽古にきていました。 雨の音を聞いたとき、私は驚きました。 お稽古の後、私はお昼ご飯に喫茶店へビーフカレーを食べに行きました。 私は疲れを感じながら帰宅しました。 夕食を作り、食べました。 そして、テレビドラマを見たり、英語の勉強をしたりしました。 明日もまた、英語を頑張るぞ。 Please check them. 添削よろしくお願い致します。

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1) It's the rainy season now. But it was cloudy today. I don't think that it's necessary to use "but" here because if it's the rainy season people are already expecting the day to be cloudy.


2) When I hard heard sounds of rain, I was surprised.


3) I got home with feeling my fatigue  fatigued/ exhausted/ tired/ wasted.

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