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Scary experience in the bathroom. I just got scared of something unknown that appeared in my bathroom.It wasn't a bug. I saw it right before I turned on the light.It was a black thing that moving so fast on the floor . As I turned on the light searching for it,I saw a thing on the wall near the sink.It was soft like a snail but without the shell.Im so not sure if it was that thing I saw at the beginning..I keep wondering,,,,It was so soft...how could it move so fast to the wall with a blink of eye.Im scared,what if it wasn't it.Then there could be another scary unknow creature in my bathroom. Now Im scared to have a shower.[emoji][emoji][emoji][emoji]

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A Scary Experience in the Bathroom

I just was frightened by an unknown "something" that appeared in my bathroom. It wasn't a bug. I initially saw it move, out of the corner of my eye, right before I turned the light on. It was a black thing that then moved so rapidly over the floor. As I turned on the light to search for it, I also saw something on the wall near the sink. It looked soft like a snail, but without the shell. I’m not too sure if it was or wasn’t the same thing I saw in the beginning. I kept wondering to myself, if it was so soft, how then, could it move so fast as to be on the wall within the blink of an eye? I then became even more scared! What if it wasn't the same thing? That would mean that there was yet another scary unknown creature in my bathroom. Now, I’m really scared to take a shower!

Hi Phoebe. Whatever changes that I’ve made were done merely to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears. Apologies if I misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you. J.

P.S. Whatever it was, or they were (most likely, a roach and a silverfish given how fast it moved, but not a slug since it moves rather slowly...), it was and they were, more afraid of you, so no need to worry! Of course, were it/they to drop or jump on you while you were in the shower that would be a whole different matter! LOL! Also, this was a very good use of events in your daily life as a topic to write about.

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Scary experience in the bathroom.

I just got scared of something unknown that appeared in my bathroom.It wasn't a bug. I saw it right before I turned on the light.It was a black thing that was moving so fast on across the floor . As I turned on the light searching to search for it,I saw a thing on the wall near the sink.It was soft like a snail but without the shell.Im so really not sure if it was that thing I saw at the beginning..I keep wondering,,,,It was so soft...how could it move so fast to the wall with a in the blink of an eye.Im scared,what if it wasn't it. was something else ?Then there could be another scary unknown creature in my bathroom. Now Im scared to have a shower.[emoji][emoji][emoji][emoji]

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