A sunny day
Today I went to the zoo with some friends. I took the tramway and arrived to the zoo at 15 : 30. My friends wanted to eat before so we went to Burger King. I wasn't that hungry so I only ate an ice cream. After that we went to the zoo.One of my friends nicely offered to pay my ticket so it was free for me. We started the visit after buying the tickets. We saw ostriches, parrots, a cheetah, wolves, pumas and one of them was black, girrafes etc. During the visit we ate an ice cream. I took a chocolate one but it was too much so I didn't finish it. There were monkeys too, I just remembered ! It was sunny outside but a little bit too hot. I wanted to go to the swimming pool so much !
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A sunny day
Today I went to the zoo with some friends. I took the tram and arrived at 15 : 30. My friends wanted to eat first so we went to Burger King. I wasn't that hungry so I only ate an ice cream. After that we went to the zoo. One of my friends kindly offered to pay for my ticket so it was free for me. We started the visit after buying the tickets. We saw ostriches, parrots, a cheetah, wolves, pumas (one of them was black), giraffes etc. During the visit we ate an ice cream. I had a chocolate one but it was too much so I didn't finish it. There were monkeys too, I just remembered ! It was sunny outside but rather hot. I wanted to go to the swimming pool so much !very well written!
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A sunny day
Today I went to the zoo with some friends. I took the tramway and arrived to at the zoo at 15:30. My friends wanted to eat before first, so we went to Burger King. I wasn't that hungry, so I only ate an ice cream. After that, we went to the zoo. One of my friends nicely offered to pay for my ticket, so it was free for me. We started the visit after buying the tickets. We saw ostriches, parrots, a cheetah, wolves, pumas (and one of them was black), girrafes etc. During the visit, we ate an ice cream. I took had a chocolate one, but it was too much, so I didn't finish it. There were monkeys too, I just remembered! It was sunny outside, but a little bit too hot. I wanted to go to the swimming pool so much!
Nicely written, Marie! Keep practicing! =)
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