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My close friend Jonatahan, he's 28 years old and he live in Rancagua, he's a Music DJ.
He's medium height and quite overweight, he has black short hair and brown eyes, he has a big nose and a mouth too.
He's really funny, extrovert, friendly, generous and kind.
Sometimes he works for himself, he works for repairing bicycles and cars. In the past he was in the communist party for long time, but after he left this party because he saw a lot corruption into this party. Right now, he isn't participating in any politics party.
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person 2
My close friend Jonathan is 28 years old, he lives in Rancagua and he's a Music DJ.He's medium height and quite overweight. He has black short hair and brown eyes and he has a big nose and a mouth too.
He's really funny, extrovert, friendly, generous and kind.
Sometimes, he works for himself, repairing bicycles and cars. In the past, he was in the communist party for a long time, but he left because he saw a lot of corruption. He isn't participating in any politics party.
Person 2 you have good english but i would read more english books to see how natives write naturally. Also simplify your sentences more
keep up the good work
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person 2
My close friend Jonatahan (Jonathan?) he's is 28 years old and, he lives in Rancagua., hHe's a Mmusic DJ.He's medium height and quite overweight, with he has black short hair and brown eyes, and he has a big nose and a mouth too.
He's really funny, extroverted, friendly, generous and kind.
Sometimes he works for himself, he works for repairing bicycles and cars. In the past he was in the communist party for long time, but afterwards he left this party because he saw a lot corruption into this party. Right now, he isn't participating in any politics political party.
Good job Elias-chile. Just a few suggestions to make it sound more natural. Let me know if you have any questions.
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