Please correct my speaking note about a piece of art.

Honestly, I am not a big fan of art, but I would like to talk about a painting I’ve seen when I was at university in college  One of my classmates was really fancy fancied all kinds of artworks, and she showed me a picture of in a book that she had brought.

With regard to the author of this book, his name is called The book was written by Jimmy Liao. He was a middle-aged illustrator who had survived a battle with leukaemia and was determined to devote himself heart and soul to his art. So I think this is probably why sometimes his paintings show the a childlike viewpoint of a child in the wide, sinister and lonely world, or to hint at loneliness.

The unforgettable pictures of his printed book that I like to describe is saw was of a train drive in flying across a starry sky and with some geometric shapes in dark blue and golden yellow on the top of the painting as well as some building on the bottom. [The picture from the book (that my friend showed me) depicts a scene from another world where colorful galaxies appearing closer than the moon is to the earth fill the night sky over a tranquil, little town as a passenger train travels across the sky.]

And as far as I know, many of his pictures are characterised by their use of striking, bold colours and depict some abstract objects. 

The reason why I am particularly fond of this painting is that because I like the way he draws. I have to say that his drawing stunned astonish me. Even though art is not my cup of tea, but I feel a sense of relaxation serenity simply by looking marveling at his creations.

Please correct my speaking note which is about a piece of an abstract art.