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Today is a master's Day in Korea I learned shooting an arrow by master who is Kim kyung-won. He is 68 years old and famous in korea by korean traditional bow. I was going to buy some present like hat for him, but I didn't. Anyway I went to an archery field and practiced shooting.

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Today is a master's Day in Korea

I recently learned archery from master archer, who is Kim Kyung-Won.
He is 68 years old and famous in Korea for using the Korean traditional bow.
I was going to buy him a present, like a hat for him, but I didn't.
Anyway, I went to an archery field with him and practiced my archery skills.
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고유명사 (사람,장소/사물,사람이름)도항상 대문자로 써야합니다.

 
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단어의순서, 단어의선택이나철자를고쳤습니다.             
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Today is a master's Day in Korea

I learned shooting an arrow by master who is Kim kyung-won.
He is 68 years old and famous in korea by korean traditional bow.
I was going to buy some present like hat for him, but I didn't.
Anyway I went to an archery field and practiced shooting.

I learned how to shoot an arrow by my instructor Kim Kyung Won. He is 68 years old plus he is well known master of the traditional bow. I was going to buy a present, like a hat, for him, but I didn't. Anyway I went to an archery field and practiced shooting.

 

 

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