My best friend

I'm talking about my best friend Verònica.

She has long blonde hair and blue eyes. She usually wears casual clothes, and her favourite colour is white. My friend is taller than me and very thin. When the weather is nice, we really like doing exercising (<--"Exercise" puede ser un verbo.) together. Yesterday, we went rollerblading on the promenade while we saw were enjoying a (<--This sounds better.) beautiful view of the sea. Sometimes, we go to the cinema at during the weekend because we loves watching English films in their original versions.

¡Excelente Criss! Has mejorado mucho =)

My best friend

I'm talking about my best friend Verònica.

She has long blonde hair and blue eyes. She usually wears casual clothes and her favourite colour is white. My friend is taller than me and very thin. When the weather is nice we really like doing exercise together. Yesterday we went rollerblading on the promenade while we saw   were watching beautiful view of the sea. Sometimes, we go to the cinema at the weekend because we loves watching English films in their original versions.

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My best friend

I'm talking about my best friend Verònica.

She has long blonde hair and blue eyes. She usually wears casual clothes and her favourite colour (these are both spelled in the British English way, so not incorrect, but good to know that Americans do not include the letter u in these two words) is white. My friend is taller than me and very thin. When the weather is nice, we really like doing exercise exercising together. Yesterday we went rollerblading on the promenade while we saw (the verb "had" sounds better here, but saw is also correct)  a beautiful view of the sea. Sometimes, we go to the cinema at on the weekend, because we loves watching English films in their original versions.