Please help me to proofread my cover letter I have written my first cover letter, I would appreciate your corrections. Dear Ms. .... I am writing to express my strong interest in applying for an ent

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Please help me to proofread my cover letter I have written my first cover letter, I would appreciate your corrections. Dear Ms. .... I am writing to express my strong interest in applying for an entry-level position at ERM, am particularly interested in the environment area of the sustainability program. I feel confident that I could contribute to your organization projects. I successfully have completed my degree in Geological Engineering from the National Autonomous University of Mexico. During my academic formation, I carried out fieldworks these provided me knowledge of field techniques, understanding, and interpretation of geological environments. It also has allowed me to develop teamwork, leadership, and problem-solving skills. Besides, I also possess good working knowledge of software such as ArcGIS, Google Earth, Global Mapper, and Microsoft Word and Excel, additionally, I created my own study methods for learning English and currently am able to speak English with native speakers with confident. I firmly believe that my education, skill set and my passion for earth sciences make me a suitable candidate for your organization. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss my application in more detail with you in an interview. Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you in due course. Kind regards,

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Please help me to proofread my cover letter

I have written my first cover letter, I would appreciate your corrections.

Dear Ms. ....

I am writing to express my strong interest for an entry-level position at ERM. I am especially drawn to the sustainability program, particularly, the environmental area. I feel confident that my education background and practical experience will enable me to contribute to your organization's projects.

I have successfully completed my [identify degree here-- Bachelor's? Master's? What?] degree in Geological Engineering from the National Autonomous University of Mexico. During my academic studies, I performed fieldwork which provided me with sound knowledge of field techniques, as well as the understanding and interpretation of geological environments. Those experiences also showed me the importance of teamwork, as well as the true value of good leadership and problem-solving skills.

Furthermore, I also possess a good working knowledge of software programs such as ArcGIS, Google Earth, Global Mapper, and Microsoft Word and Excel. Additionally, through the creation of my own study methods for, and my diligence in, learning English, I am currently able to converse in English with confidence.

I firmly believe that my educational background, my life experiences, and my passion for earth sciences all combine to make me an excellent candidate for any entry-level position within your organization. I gladly welcome the opportunity to discuss my qualifications with you in more detail, in person, during an interview.

Thank you for your consideration and I look forward to hearing from you soon.

Sincerely,

Hi Maria. I am more used to correcting essays rather that cover letters, so apologies that I cannot comment as to your formatting. Please be aware that there are numerous ways of composing such a letter. I mainly just focused on making your text sound natural to my native ears. However, I hope that this helps you. J.

Please help me to proofread my cover letter

I have written my first cover letter, I would appreciate your corrections.

Dear Ms. ....

I am writing to express my strong interest in applying for an entry-level position at ERM, I am particularly interested in the environment area of the sustainability program. I feel confident that I could contribute to your organization projects.

I have successfully completed my degree in Geological Engineering from the National Autonomous University of Mexico. During my academic formation, I carried out fieldworks these provided me knowledge of field techniques, understanding, and interpretation of geological environments. It also has allowed me to develop teamwork, leadership, and problem-solving skills.

Also, I also possess good working knowledge of software such as ArcGIS, Google Earth, Global Mapper, and Microsoft Word and Excel. Additionally, I created my own study methods for learning English and currently am able to speak English with native speakers with confidence.

I firmly believe that my education, skill set and my passion for earth sciences make me a suitable candidate for your organization. I would welcome the opportunity to discuss my application in more detail with you in an interview.

Thank you for your time and consideration. I look forward to hearing from you in due course.

Kind regards,

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