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练习新生词 阳台: 阳台在房子的西边 出差: 这星期我丈夫必须出差。最近他常不在家。他打算回家以后请假。 段: 这段时间她没有时间洗衣服,打扫房间,所以她妈妈帮她的忙。 新鲜: 今天超市的水果很新鲜 糖: 糖对牙很不好。别忘了吃糖以后刷牙。 影响: 我爸爸的想法影响了我不结婚我女朋友 相同: 我和我同学的考试结果相同 左右: 我同屋买了三个香蕉左右 小姐, 校长: 李小姐当校长 新闻: 爸爸在客厅里看新闻 兴趣: 小丽对打篮球有兴趣 行李箱: 李先生在机场,他要出差。虽然他发现行李箱没有了。在哪儿? 学期: 我现在在八学期 云: 云好像一个兔子一样

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练习新生词

阳台: 阳台在房子的西边
出差: 这星期我丈夫必须出差。最近他常不在家。他打算回家以后请假。
段: 这段时间她没有时间洗衣服,打扫房间,所以她妈妈帮她的忙。
新鲜: 今天超市的水果很新鲜。
糖: 糖对牙齿很不好。别忘了吃糖以后要刷牙。
影响: 我爸爸的想法影响了我不结婚我女朋友。(看不懂)
相同: 我和我同学的考试结果相同。
左右: 我同屋买了三个左右的香蕉。(roomate = 室友,【左右】应该紧接在量词【个】后面,如果后面有名词则需要插入【的】字)
小姐, 校长: 李小姐当校长。
新闻: 爸爸在客厅里看新闻。
兴趣: 小丽对打篮球有兴趣。
行李箱: 李先生在机场,他要出差。然而他发现行李箱没有了。在哪儿?(【虽然】就像英文中的【though】,【虽然】常与【但是】搭配,表示一种转折关系)
学期: 我现在在八学期 。(没有【在八学期】的说法,也许你的意思是【大四】?)
云: 云好像一个兔子一样。

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 I'm in the 8 semester = 我现在大四下学期。(虽然【semester】的确是中文中【学期】的意思,但是我们一般不说【在X学期】,而是用【大一上学期】【大一下学期】【大二上学期】等代替)

his fathers opinion influenced him in making the decision to not marry his girlfriend. = 他父亲的想法影响了他以至于他决定不跟他女朋友结婚。(【以至于】就像英文中的【as a result】,这个句子很难逐字翻译)

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I noticed the revises above, and they are great! While, here are some additional suggestions, hopefully they will be helpful.

新生词练习(When you say 练习新生词 in Chinese, that seems like to say "practice new vocabularies". It's a sentence rather than a title, so I suggest you use the expression  新生词练习, here the word 练习 plays like a noun.In Chinese, we usually use noun as a title so as to keep the simplicity.)

影响: 我爸爸的想法影响了我,我不和我女朋友结婚(1. Unlike English ,or maybe German as well, which likes to organize sentence in a complex while logical structure. Chinese usually cut the sentence into small units, we keep each unit short and simple which usually just contain a single information, and then put every units together. 2. I guess you probably misunderstood the verb 结婚, it's intransitive in Chinese, so you should say "和XX结婚", like "marry with sb" in English. Btw, is there “transitive marry" in Chinese? Sure, they are "嫁" and "娶", the former one means a girl marry to a guy, and the latter one means a guy marry with a girl.)

左右: 我同屋买了三个左右的香蕉(Certainly it's a right sentence, but a little bit weird. No one will use approximation when taking about just three bananas, we can count them, right?)
小姐, 校长: 李小姐当校长(Another right but weird sentence, be very careful when using “小姐”, because nowadays this word usually means a prostitute, try to use 女士 instead)

学期: 我现在在八年级 (学期 means semester in Chinese, while talking about grade we use the word 年级, please try to distinguish the difference in the following sentence: 我这学期已经八年级了)


Have fun with your Chinese learning!

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练习新生词

阳台: 阳台在房子的西边
出差: 这星期我丈夫必须出差。最近他常不在家。他打算回家以后请假。
段: 这段时间她没有时间洗衣服,打扫房间,所以她妈妈帮她的忙。
新鲜: 今天超市的水果很新鲜
糖: 糖对牙很不好。别忘了吃完糖要刷牙。
影响: 我爸爸的想法影响了我不跟我的女朋友结婚
相同: 我和我室友的考试结果相同
左右: 我室友买了三支左右的香蕉
小姐, 校长: 李小姐当上了校长
新闻: 爸爸在客厅里看新闻
兴趣: 小丽对打篮球有兴趣
行李箱: 李先生在机场,他要出差。但是他发现行李箱不见了。它们在哪儿?
学期: 我现在读第八学期 (现在是我大学的第八个学期)
云: 云好像一只兔子一样

Hope it will make sense. thank you.


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