Taiwan trip
One day on April, my co-worker came to Taiwan. I used to have dinner with her when I was in Japan. She belongs to Narita airport department. Though she is different from the section where I belong to, we are in charge of the same customer. It is the first time for her to sightseen at Taipei, I decided to take her around the most famous tourist spot in Taiwan.
At first we went to Shifen. This place is the famous spot where Lantern Festival is held on February. Even except for a festival period, it is possible to release lanterns in the sky every day. So we wrote us wishes on the lanterns and released them in the sky. Then we went to Jiufen that I wonder almost Japanese people who visit Taiwan know. Because a famous Japanese comic movie is set in this place, there were so many Japanese people on that day too. We have talked over a cup of tea for a long time.
While she stayed in my house, I was able to spend very happy time and glad for coming here.
Search from various English teachers...
Corrections · 4
0
Taiwan trip
One day in April, my co-worker came to Taiwan. I used to have dinner with her when I was in Japan. She works in the Narita airport department. [or] She works at Narita airport. Though she was in a different section than me, we were in charge of the same customers. It was her first time sightseeing in Taipei, so I decided to take her around the most famous tourist spots in Taiwan.First, we went to Shifen. This place is the famous spot where the Lantern Festival is held in February. Even when not for a festival period, it is possible to release lanterns into the sky every day. So we wrote our wishes on the lanterns and released them into the sky. Then we went to Jiufen, which I think almost all Japanese people who visit Taiwan know. This is because a famous Japanese comic movie is set in this place. There were so many Japanese people on that day too. We talked over a cup of tea for a long time.
While she stayed at my house, I was very happy to be able spend time with her and was glad she could come here.
= Maybe. Depends on your meaning.
= Not wrong, but more natural sounding.
0
Taiwan trip
One day on in April, my co-worker came to Taiwan. I used to have dinner with her when I was in Japan. She belongs to Narita airport department. Though we worked in different sections, we were in charge of the same customer. It was her first time sightseeing at Taipei, so I decided to take her around the most famous tourist spot in Taiwan.At first we went to Shifen. This place is the famous spot where Lantern Festival is held in February. Even when it is not festival period, it is possible to release lanterns into the sky every day. So we wrote our wishes on the lanterns and released them into the sky. Then we went to Jiufen, a place that I imagine Japanese people who visit Taiwan know because a famous Japanese comic movie is set in this place. There were so many Japanese people on that day too. We have talked over a cup of tea for a long time.
While she stayed in my house, I was very happy to spend time with her, and I'm glad she was able to come.
I hope I was of some help. If you have questions, don't hesitate to ask. ^^
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!
Don’t miss out on the opportunity to learn a language from the comfort of your own home. Browse our selection of experienced language tutors and enroll in your first lesson now!
Start Learning Today
