I baked three cakes
I was busy today .I waked up early and did house works then I went to school and when I returned in the afternoon I made these three cakes .
I want to decorate them with banana cream and coconut. I am not certain if I will succeed to decorate them nicely.
Wish me good luck .
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I baked three cakes
I was busy today. I waked woke up early and did house works, and then I went to school. and When I returned in the afternoon, I made these three cakes .
Wish me good luck!
I'm sure your cakes will come out lovely, Nada =)
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I baked three cakes
I was busy today. I waked woke up early and did houseworks then I went to school and when I returned in the afternoon I made these three cakes.I want to decorate them with banana cream and coconut. I am not certain if I will succeed to decorate in decorating them nicely.
Wish me good luck.
That sounds great Nada. Just a few minor corrections. Also, note that there is no space before the period at the end of a sentence.
Good luck with decorating the cakes!
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