Learning English (Not sure what you mean by "remembrance")

Good morning from Myanmar.

Well. I would like to tell you about myself. I was born in Mandalay in 1988. Nowadays, Mandalay is the third largest city in Myanmar. Historically, Mandalay was the main city of Myanmar, before the country was taken over by the British.

My family lives in Mandalay now. My family members number seven, including myself,  but my father passed away in 2006. Two years ago, when I was 26 years old, I married and moved to Yangon, the second largest city in Myanmar. 

I didn't start learning English until I graduated in 2012. My English vocabulary and pronunciation was very bad. After graduation, I applied for a liaison position in the 27th Sea Games (2013) in Myanmar. That job was to communicate with people from different countries. I was selected to coordinate with the Thailand sports team. As I mentioned, my English is not good. So, I paid some fees to a senior officer to learn English. After three months, I was able to understand other people's English a little.

Sorry ! Let me stop here because I am writing this note at the office. I will continue my note when I have free time.

Kindly edit and check out my note.Thank you for your attention.

Thanda

 

Your English is not bad! Although your grammar is lacking, I can understand your meaning perfectly for almost all your sentences, which is the first and most important step in effective communication, in my opinion. 

Remembrance of learning English

Good morning from Myanmar!

Well, I would like to tell you about me. I was born in Mandalay in 1988. Nowadays, Mandalay is the third largest city of in Myanmar. In Throughout its history, Mandalay was had been a lasting palace of Myanmar before being ruled over by the British.

My family lives in Mandalay now. I have seven family members, are seven including me myself, but my father had gone passed away in 2006. When I am 26 was twenty-six years old (two years ago), I got married and moved to Yangon, the second largest city of in Myanmar, 2 years ago.

I didn't learn English until I have got graduated in 2012. My English and pronunciation was very bad. After graduating, I applied for a liaison position for the 27th Sea Games (2013) in Myanmar. That The job is to required communicating with people from different countries. I was selected to coordinate with Thailand's sport team. You know, As I already told you said, my English is was not good, so I was learning English from a senior officer by giving paying fees. After 3 three months, I am was able to understand other people's English accent a little.

Sorry! Let me stop here, because I am writing this note at the office. I will continue my note when I have free time.

Kindly edit and check out my note.Thank you for your attention.

Thanda

Welcome to Italki, Thanda. This isn't bad at all. You clearly do have a good grasp of English, and with more practice, you'll definitely continue getting better. Please feel free to use this website to help you improve. If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to ask =)