A cat farm
My cat, which accompanied me for 20 years was dead last week. Couldn't help but thinking about him. Few days ago, I found out some packs of cat's hair I shaved before. I got a cool idea that is I am going to use them for knitting. My friend said I am crazy. Well I told him I am going to start a cat farm business, raising different color and pattern cats, shaving their hair as wool. Tourists who visit my farm can experience weaving. And my friend just said, coming back from your cat farm dream! Aw... I just miss my cat so bad.
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A cat farm
My cat, which who has accompanied me for 20 twenty (<--通常100以下的数字最好写词。) years, was dead died last week. I couldn't help but thinking about him. A few days ago, I found out some packs of cat's hair I shaved before. I got a cool idea: that is I am going to use them for knitting. My friend said I am crazy. Well, I told him I am going to start a cat farm business, raising different colored and patterned cats and shaving their hair as wool. Tourists who visit my farm can would be able to experience weaving. And My friend just said, told me to come back from your my cat farm dream! Aw... I just miss my cat so badly.
I'm sorry to hear about your cat, Chienrong. Honor him by celebrating what he gave you =)
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A cat farm
My cat, which accompanied me for 20 years,** was dead died last week. I couldn't help but think about him. A few days ago, I found out (when we "find out" something, we are searching for some information or we become aware of something. When we "find" something, we noticed the presence of something, which is your cat's fur.) packs of my cat's hair fur(the hair of certain mammals are described by special words. For example, the hair of a cat or dog is known as fur. The hair of a sheep is known as wool.) which I had shaved off from my cat before. (we use past perfect tense to describe an even earlier action: had shaved) I got a cool idea that is I am going to use them for knitting. My friend said I am crazy. Well, I told him that I am going to start a cat farm business, raising cats of different fur colors and patterns cats, and shaving their fur. hair as wool. Tourists who visit my farm can experience weaving. My friend just told me to stop dreaming about my cat farm idea. said, coming back from your cat farm dream! Aw... I just miss my cat so badly. (we change the word "bad" to "badly" as the latter is an adverb of degree to show how much you miss your cat.)** Sometimes, we include other extraneous information about a noun by using commas.
Example: This book, which is written more than one hundred years ago, provides relevant advice to modern teenagers.
Notice that the green portion contains extraneous information that is optional. The main message is: This book provides relevant advice to modern teenagers.
The extraneous information is written within two commas. We call this an appositive.
Hi Chienrong,
I can empathise with your loss. When my dog passed away in 2014, it felt as if a family member had left us. I must say I like your cat. He had cute round eyes and a whole lot of character written on his face.
Do cheer up. Your cat is now in a better place.
Cheers,
Lance
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