Mixed Feelings
Today,I went out for an interview.There were so many applicants that i feelde i was so ordinary and so many aspects that i need to improve.However,i did not feel so sad,because i like challanges and i really learn a lot from this activity.
When I was on my way back to school,i was almost cheated.how dangerous.
The socity is diffient to the colleges,the sheep ande the goats,affectation and true...it is a complex assemble.
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Mixed Feelings
Today, I wentThe society is diffierent to the colleges,the sheep ande the goats,affectation and true...it is a complex assemble.
1. These are my words and ideas and not yours because I can only guess at what you are trying to say. So change it if you think I had guessed wrongly. Unless you are translating from a Chinese essay to retain the flavour of the source language, try not to use Chinese idioms but the western equivalent. If none exist, then try to express it differently. This is because the English reader has no idea of what you are trying to say. For eample, 不入虎穴焉得虎子. In English it is "Nothing ventured nothing gained" and not its literal translation. Using footnotes to explain is not acceptable in informal writing. Footnotes are for formal papers and for explanation such as what I am doing so that you understand what is going on.
When using the word, "I" meaning 我, you must capitalized it. This the cultural rule in English to emphasize the importance of me. Totally opposite in the Chinese society.
A note about your punctuation spacing... You only leave a space after all punctuations except for the full stop (period) which requires 2 extra spacing. Leave a blank line for the next paragraph. These are the standard rules you must obey otherwise your piece comes across as uneducated and no one will seriously want to read what you are saying.
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