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Today I got up early today, as usual at 10 a.m. I'm not working today, but In the morning I had to go to Hotel for medical examination. I'd gone to the kitchen and made a sandwich with cheese and ham. I'd used my grill, cause it's the better way to get the best sandwich. When you fry bread, the taste is changes and cheese getting melted. I guess you know how yummy it is. So, when I had a breakfast, I got dressed and went to a Hotel. It took about 40 minutes, and for me it seems not so long. I always read the book while I'm getting to job by subway. I really enjoy it, cause you don't think about your surroundings when you're sitting or standing and reading the book. Afterwards, I've been in a Hotel for 2 or 3 hours. When I came to medical examination, I got the document which contains list of doctors and empty place where they need to write feedback about my physical condition. I had to pass some examinations like giving blood, urine test, electrocardiogram, swab, check the throat and ears, fluorography and whatnot. Every employee in our Hotel gotta pass the medical examination for further work. If you don't pass it, employer will prohibit you to go to work. When you're working with food, you must be healthy and don't have any diseases, otherwise If you not healthy, you can contaminate food which you cook for your customers or if somebody have mental disease he/she can poison the dish which he/she cooked of for instance you can lose consciousness and hurt yourself. i want to finish my text here, cause I really exhausted now after was writing this text.

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Today

I get up early today, as usual at 10 a.m. I'm not working today, but In the morning I have to go to Hotel for medical examination. I went to the kitchen and made a sandwich with cheese and ham. I have used my grill, cause it's the better way to get the best sandwich. When you fry bread, the taste is change and cheese becoming melted. I guess you know how yummy it is. So, when I had a breakfast, I got dressed and went to a Hotel. It took about 40 minutes, and for me, it seems not so long. I always read the book while I'm going to work by subway. I really enjoy it, cause you don't think about your surroundings when you're sitting or standing and reading the book. Afterwards, I've been in a Hotel for 2 or 3 hours. When I came to the medical examination, I got the document which contains the list of doctors and empty place where they need to write feedback about my physical condition. I had to pass some examinations like giving blood, urine test, electrocardiogram, swab, check the throat and ears, fluorography and whatnot. Every employee in our Hotel gotta pass the medical examination for further work. If you don't pass it, the employer will prohibit you to go to work. When you're working with food, you must be healthy and don't have any diseases, otherwise If you not healthy, you can contaminate food which you cook for your customers or if somebody have mental disease he/she can poison the dish which he/she cooked of for instance you can lose consciousness and hurt yourself. I want to finish my text here, cause I really exhausted now after was writing this text.
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Привет, Максим, ты отлично справился. У меня не было проблем с пониманием текста. Есть несколько проблем...

Today

I got up early today, as usual at 10 a.m. (early means earlier than usual, so this doesn't make sense) I got up earlier than usual today at 10am. I'm not working today, but In the morning (you are already talking about the morning & today - so no need to repeat that) but I had to go to Hotel (is this the right word?) for a medical examination. I'd gone to the kitchen and made a sandwich with cheese and ham. I'd used my grill, cause it's the better way to get the best sandwich. When you fry bread, the taste is changes and the cheese getting melted. melts. I guess you know how yummy it is. So, when I had a breakfast (*unnecessary), I* got dressed and went to a the Hotel. It took about 40 minutes, and for me it seems not so that isn't long. I always read the a book while I'm getting to job work by subway. I really enjoy it, because (you will hear cause in conversation & in USA but it is bad english) you don't think about your surroundings when you're sitting or standing and reading the a book. Afterwards, I've been in a After being at the Hotel for 2 or 3 hours, I had my .When I came to medical examination. I was given got the document which contains a list of doctors and the form for them empty place where they need to write feedback about my physical condition. I had to pass some examinations like giving blood, urine test, electrocardiogram, swab, check the throat and ears, fluorography and whatnot (good word !). Every employee in our Hotel gotta (you will hear this but it is bad english - it is actually 'got a')  passed pass the medical examination for further work. If you don't pass it, your employer will prohibit you to go to work. When you're working with food, you must be healthy and don't have any diseases, otherwise If you not healthy, you can contaminate food which you cook for your customers or if somebody have mental disease he/she can poison the dish which he/she cooked of for instance you can lose consciousness and hurt yourself. i want to finish my text here, cause I am really exhausted now after was writing this text. То же самое происходит со мной, по-русски.

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Len

from Australia

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Today

Today, as usual, I got up early - at 10 a.m. I'm not working today, but in the morning I had to go to the hospital for a medical examination. I went to the kitchen and made a sandwich with cheese and ham. I used my grill, cause it's the best way to get the best sandwich. When you fry bread, the taste changes and the cheese melts. I guess you know how yummy it is. 

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