五月十二号的日记第一
昨天我跟我的中国人朋友在线聊天和我真的让我不好意思。我的朋友试图说话他的近来的新闻。 他说他的父母回了老家，所以由于带孩子接送幼儿园，他得请假。可是正好他有四天假就要到期。
Yesterday, in a conversation with my Chinese friend, I really embarrassed myself. My friend was trying to tell me his recent news. He said that his parents returned to their old home, and, because he had to take his son to kindergarten, he had to ask for time off. But it just so happened that he had four days of vacation about to expire.
先，我不辨认了“到期”。我辨认了都汉字可是不知道那个词。我想通了。然后他不提及幼儿园才后面。 所以我以为他接送孩子到他父母的老家。 但是我不确定.所以我问了他。 他说了他得请假以便带孩子幼儿园。 可是因为某理由我不知道，我以为了他的意思是因为他要去看他父母以前他父母会老家，他得接送孩子。
First, I didn't recognize 到期。 I knew both characters, but not the word. I figured it out. Then, he didn't mention "kindergarten" until later, so I thought he was taking his son to see his parents at their old home. But I wasn't sure. So I asked him. He said he had to ask for time off from work in order to take his son to kindergarten. But for some reason I don't know, I thought he meant that he had to drop off his son, because he was going to see his parents before they returned to their ancestral home.
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五月十二号的第一篇日记
昨天我跟我的中国朋友在线聊天，我真的使我自己陷入了尴尬的境地。我的朋友试图说他近来的新闻。 他说他的父母回了老家，所以为了带孩子上幼儿园，他得请假。可是正好他有四天假就要到期。Yesterday, in a conversation with my Chinese friend, I really embarrassed myself. My friend was trying to tell me his recent news. He said that his parents returned to their old home, and, because he had to take his son to kindergarten, he had to ask for time off. But it just so happened that he had four days of vacation about to expire.
起先，我不认识“到期”。我认出了所有汉字可是不知道那个词。我最后想通了。然后他直到后面才提及幼儿园。 所以我以为他带孩子到他父母的老家。 但是我不确定.所以我问了他。 他说了他得请假以便带孩子幼儿园。 可是因为某些理由我不知道，我以为他的意思是因为他要在他父母回老家前去看一次他父母，所以他得接送孩子。
First, I didn't recognize 到期。 I knew both characters, but not the word. I figured it out. Then, he didn't mention "kindergarten" until later, so I thought he was taking his son to see his parents at their old home. But I wasn't sure. So I asked him. He said he had to ask for time off from work in order to take his son to kindergarten. But for some reason I don't know, I thought he meant that he had to drop off his son, because he was going to see his parents before they returned to their ancestral home.
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五月十二号的第一篇日记
我昨天跟我的中国朋友的在线聊天，真的让我很尴尬。我的朋友试图讲述他的近况。 他说他的父母回了老家，而他不得不请假因为他需要接送孩子上幼儿园。可是恰巧的是，他还有四天假就要到期。Yesterday, in a conversation with my Chinese friend, I really embarrassed myself. My friend was trying to tell me his recent news. He said that his parents returned to their old home, and, because he had to take his son to kindergarten, he had to ask for time off. But it just so happened that he had four days of vacation about to expire.
首先，我不能理解“到期”。我知道这两个字但是我不知道这个词。我(后来？)想通了。然后他后来才提到幼儿园，所以我以为他要送他的回老家看他父母。 但是我当时不确定，所以我就问了他。 他说了他得请假以便带孩子去幼儿园。 但是出于某些我不知道的原因，我以为他的意思是他得去接送孩子，因为他打算在他父母离开前去看他的父母。
First, I didn't recognize 到期。 I knew both characters, but not the word. I figured it out. Then, he didn't mention "kindergarten" until later, so I thought he was taking his son to see his parents at their old home. But I wasn't sure. So I asked him. He said he had to ask for time off from work in order to take his son to kindergarten. But for some reason I don't know, I thought he meant that he had to drop off his son, because he was going to see his parents before they returned to their ancestral home.
I made all the corrections based on the English version that you wrote, if you have any question, I am glad to help you.
感谢你多次修改我的小作文，希望这次我的修改能对你有所帮助。加油！
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五月十二号的日记第一
昨天我跟我的中国人朋友在线聊天时和我，真的让我不好意思倍感尴尬。我的朋友试图说话他的近来的新闻。 他说他的因为父母回了老家，所以由于他得请假带孩子接送孩子上幼儿园，他得请假。可是正好他的假期还有四天假就要到期。Yesterday, in a conversation with my Chinese friend, I really embarrassed myself. My friend was trying to tell me his recent news. He said that his parents returned to their old home, and, because he had to take his son to kindergarten, he had to ask for time off. But it just so happened that he had four days of vacation about to expire.
先一开始，我不辨认了认识“到期”。我辨认了都认识每个汉字，可是不知道认识那个词。直到他后面提及幼儿园，我才想通了明白。然后他不提及幼儿园才后面。 所以但我一开始以为他接送孩子到去他父母的老家。 但是我不确定.所以我问了他。 他说了他得请假以便带孩子上幼儿园。 可是因为某理由种我不知道的原因，我以为了他的意思是因为在他父母回老家前，他要去看望他父母以前他父母会老家，所以他得接送（drop off？）孩子。
First, I didn't recognize 到期。 I knew both characters, but not the word. I figured it out. Then, he didn't mention "kindergarten" until later, so I thought he was taking his son to see his parents at their old home. But I wasn't sure. So I asked him. He said he had to ask for time off from work in order to take his son to kindergarten. But for some reason I don't know, I thought he meant that he had to drop off his son, because he was going to see his parents before they returned to their ancestral home.
two tips：
1-use "的" as little as possible；
2-a difference between English and Chinese is “因为” and “所以” are frequently occur together in Chinese.
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