News Translation
In response to a suicide from overwork at Dentu, Health Ministry has decided to publicize firms filed charges of forcing their employers to work for illegal long hours on its website.
厚生労働省は電通の過労自殺の問題などを受けて、違法な長時間労働をさせたなどとして書類送検された企業を一覧にしてホームページで公開することにしました。
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(お手柔らかに.....）
Due to the incident,in which one of employee of Dentsu committed suicide because of her overworking , Health Ministry has decided to reveal all the company's name on its official website,which were filed,and accused of illegally forcing its employees to work for long hours.In response to the→Due to the,Because of
publicize →reveal
on its website はall the company's name の直後に置いた方が良いと思う
文章の一番最後に置くと不自然な感じがする
厚生労働省は電通の過労自殺の問題などを受けて、
違法な長時間労働をさせたなどとして書類送検された企業を一覧にしてホームページで公開することにしました。
btw,I heard about that news,too...
....Ah...Japan,,,,what've done to yourself.....
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アクビさんの投稿を期しています。
News Translation
In response to a suicide from overwork at Dentu, the Health Ministry has decided to publicize firms filed charges accused of forcing their employees to work (for) illegal long hours on its/their website. (I think you could put "on their website" after "publicize" and it might be a little more clear. With long sentences, it becomes ambiguous. For instance here maybe the companies had people work on their websites, on the company websites too long and that was what was illegal and now being publicized. Or: ", the Ministry of Health and Labor has decided that firms accused of forcing their employees to work illegal long hours will be publicized on their website." Is Dentu? Dentsu? "filed charges" is the inverse of 送検 I think... the prosecutor files charges against the accused. Also "work illegal long hours" is better than "work for", "work for", the "for" is usually the に in 会社に勤める And the "employer employs the employee")厚生労働省は電通の過労自殺の問題などを受けて、違法な長時間労働をさせたなどとして書類送検された企業を一覧にしてホームページで公開することにしました。
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