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Wealthy and healthy People hold different opinions in the question of which more important between wealthy and healthy .some people think that wealth is more important in life .On the contrary ,the other people consist that unless we are healthy ,we will not do anything. Some people think that wealth is most important in life.Because of wealth ,not only can we purchase lots of goods,but also get a fine fame,social standings. The other people consist that unless we are healthy ,we will not do anything.For example,when you catch cold ,even if the simple work ,you will find so difficult that you can't completely finish it . As for I'm concerned ,i am agree that health is most important .Because if we are unhealthy,we can't go after anything.

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Wealthy and Healthy

People hold different opinions as to the importance between wealth and health. Some people think that wealth is more important in life. On the other hand, other people consider that, unless we are healthy, we will not accomplish anything.
Some people think that wealth is the most important thing in life, because not only can we purchase lots of goods, but also can get fame and a high social status.
Other people think that, unless we are healthy, we will not do anything. For example, when you catch a cold, even if it is a simple task, you will find it so difficult to finish it.
As far as I'm concerned, I agree that health is the most important, because if we are sick, we can't pursue our dreams. :)
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Thank you Greg^^
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I think you did a very standard format for language test. Wish you a good luck for your exam! Haha

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