My first week on italki (PLEASE CHECK AND CORRECT IT:)
Hi everyone, today I have considered the importance of website such as italki in learning a foreign language and I must admit that this kind of instruments are fundamental because they give us the possibility to be corrected everytime and allowed us to make many friends from the remotest part of the world as well. This week I made many friends from USA and I scheduled conversations on skype with them in order to get know each other. The people who never give up in learning are the people I admire the most and I will never be tired to help them. Despite of the tiredness caused by too much study in the last days I had several chat on skype.
My plans for next days concerned the development of my vucabolary. I am strongly motivated to get better and improve my knowledge even though I know that sometimes is difficult to find concentration and time to devote to this activity expecially for those who like me are busy with university. However tomorrow I will get in my car and go to university with a big smile on my face and when I'll come back home start again to write another page of this sort of journal or diary.
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My First Week On Italki (Please Check And Correct It:)
Hi everyone, today I have considered the importance of a website such as Italki in learning a foreign language, and I must admit, that this kind of resource is fundamental, because it gives us the ability to be connected, and allows us to make many friends from the most remote parts of the world as well. This week, I made many friends from the US, and I scheduled conversations on Skype with them, in order to get to know each other. The people who never give up in learning, are the people I admire the most, and I will never be tired of helping them. Despite being tired because of too much studying, I had several chats on Skype in the past few days.
My plans for the next few days, will be to develop my vocabulary. I am strongly motivated to get better and improve my knowledge, even though I know that sometimes, it's difficult to find people to have conversations with, and time to devote to the activity, especially for those who like me, are busy with university. However, tomorrow, I will get in my car, and go to university with a big smile on my face, and when I get home, write another entry of this sort in my journal.
Nicely done Giovanni, you are improving my friend! Some of your words, and word endings did not match context, however. I also corrected a few minor spelling errors, and noticed minor problems with capitalization of proper nouns, and comma usage. All in all though, not bad! You will improve with time and practice and already, I have seen improvement! If you have any questions, please let me know!
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My first week on italki (PLEASE CHECK AND CORRECT IT:)
Hi everyone, today I have considered the importance of websites such as italki in learning a foreign language and I must admit that these kind of sites are of great value because they give us the possibility of being corrected everytime and give us opportunities to make many friends from the remotest part of the world as well. This week I made many friends from USA and I scheduled conversations on skype with them so we can get know one another. The people who never give up in learning are the people I admire the most and I will never be tired Of helping them. Despite the tiredness caused by too much studying over the last few days, I had several chats on skype.My plans for the next few days involve the development of my vocabulary. I am strongly motivated to get better and improve my knowledge, even though I know that sometimes it is difficult to find concentration and time to devote to this activity - especially for those who like me, are busy with university. However, tomorrow I will get in my car and go to university with a big smile on my face and when I come home, I plan to write another page of this sort of journal or diary.
Well done Giovanni! I admire people who never stop learning too!
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Since others have already corrected this, I won't. :) But I wanted to say that it's great to hear that you are so dedicated to learning! Websites like this one are great resources, allowing us to expand our knowledge. Italki, of course, just deals with language learning, but there are also websites that give instructions for other things as well, and I think that's wonderful.
Good luck studying vocabulary! Find a teacher who helps you not only learn new words, but how to incorporate them into your speech and lifestyle. :)
Have a great day~!
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