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Broken the cup I accidentally broke a cup that I used for years. The cup traveled with me, we have a lot of memories. I asked my friend to help me find the same cup but did not sell it anymore.

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My Broken Cup

Recently, I accidentally broke a cup that I have used for years. Whenever I traveled I took the cup with me, so we shared a lot of experiences together, and whenever I used or saw it, it brought back good memories. As a result, I asked my friend to help me find another cup exactly like it, but sadly, no store sells it anymore.

Hi Margie. Good job! I made a few minor changes to allow your sentences to sound better to my native ears, but I easily understood everything that you wanted tell me. Keep learning and keep writing! I hope that this helps you. J.

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Broken The Broken Cup

I accidentally broke a cup that I've used for years. The cup traveled with me. We have a lot of memories together.
I asked my friend to help me find the same cup but they did do not sell it anymore.


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Well done! I like the emotion this evokes.

-Margie

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Do not give him a name, let him go.
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Ooops! A good cup is like a good friend. You will miss her. I have had the same small coffee cup for years. Do you think I should name him?

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