Brief of my vacation in this year.
The last month i enjoy my vacation. I went to visit my grandmother in Northeastern Brazil. I didn’t walk too much there, however, I went a village where live my uncle and went to two neighbour towns. In one town, I picked some people up in a farm, in other town, I take a bath in thermal waters in two different touristic point.
I ate many fruits and other foods which don’t have in my region as umbú (fruit from semi-arid region of Brazil). I ate acarajé (street food from Bahia state) and breads very different from I live (they more delicious then breads from my city). I drank a goat milk with coffee at breakfast.
I slept on the hammock while I stayed there. There are beds, but I prefer to slept it. Here in my region people don’t have hammock.
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Brief of my vacation in this year.
The last month i enjoy my vacation. I went to visit my grandmother in Northern Brazil. I didn’t walk too much there, however, I went a village where live my uncle and went to two neighbour towns. In one town, I picked some people up in a farm, in other town, I take a bath in thermal waters in two different touristic point.I ate many fruits and other foods which don’t have in my region as umbú (fruit from semi-arid region of Brazil). I ate acarajé (street food from Bahia state) and breads very different from I live (they more delicious then breads from my city). I drank a goat milk with coffee at breakfast.
I slept on the hammock while I stayed there. There are beds, but I prefer to slept it. Here in my region people don’t have hammock.
Easy to understand, but a few grammatical changes would make it better (:
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A brief description of my vacation this year.
Last month I enjoyed a vacation. I went to visit my grandmother in Northern Brazil. I didn't walk very much, but I went to a village where my uncle lives and went to two neighboring towns. In one town, I picked some people up from a farm, and in the other town, I bathed in hot springs in two different touristic locations.
I ate many fruits and other foods that we don't have in my region, like umbú, fruit from a semi-arid region of Brazil. I also ate acarajé, which is street food from Bahia, and some very different, very delicious breads. I drank goat milk with coffee at breakfast.
I slept on a hammock while I was there. There were beds, but I preferred to sleep in the hammock because in my region, we don't have hammocks.
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northeastern.
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Northern or northeastern?
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