Boxing TV program.
Last night, I watched the TV program that fight with Koki Kameda and four amateur persons one by one in boxing.
If amateur persons win by Kameda they can get ten million yen.
The result was in sight.
However we can excite by this TV program.
Because drama is in this fight.
The story is bad guy become good guy.
It's common story for fighting sports, movie, and TV drama.
They were aim at it and did their best.
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Laura's correction is good also
Boxing TV program.
Last night, I watched the TV program that fight with where Koki Kameda andfights four amateur persons one by one in boxing.If an amateur persons wins by against Kameda they can get ten million yen. (I assume the 10 million yen is for whichever amateur beats Kameda if they are able to. "The win by Kameda was Kameda's win against the amateur.")
The result was in sight. (I don't understand what you mean by this. Its a good sentence but... do you mean you knew the result already or expected it already? That Kameda always wins, for instance? If so "The result was predictable." is better. "in sight" is like something that you can see on the "horizon", up ahead. Like at the end of a race, the finish line is "in sight".)
However we can get/become excited by this TV program.
Because there is (some/a lot of) drama is in this fight.
The story is bad guy becomes good guy. (I think you mean "underdog", the challenger defeats the incumbent. "bad guy" is a villain. 悪者）
It's a common story for/in fighting sports, movies, and TV dramas. (plurals to be consistent, and also because its in general)
They weretook aim at it and did their best. (Laura's correction for this is right. 目指す 's equivalent "take aim at" is not used quite as frequently and widely in English as it is in Japanese. I think that's the word you mean. "They took their best shot." is also a phrase that's used similarly. But "took aim" is kind of like a set phrase. "took aim at it" is okay, but a little awkward because they're not really "taking aim at the fight", more "in the fight", sort of, maybe "at Kameda." Personally I am unsure in Japanese when to use 目指す and which どちら助詞)
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Boxing TV Program
Last night, I watched the a TV program that stages boxing fights with between Koki Kameda and four amateurs persons one by one in boxing. If amateurs persons win by against Kameda, they can get ten million yen. The result was in sight. However we can excite by find this TV program exciting. Because the drama is in this fight. The story is the bad guy becomes the good guy. It's a common story for in fighting sports, movies, and TV dramas. They were took aim at it and did their best.Good job! We can say simply "amateurs" rather than "amateur persons."
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