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紅梅滿天疑是春, Red plum blossoms filled the sky and I wondered if it's spring time yet.
白雪紛飛眼前冬, White snow flying profusely before me I cannot deny it's still winter.
苦酒獨酌難免愁, Bitter is the wine as I pour alone in sorrow which I cannot escape.
霎時人間一塲夢. How quickly a life time becomes a dream...
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紅梅滿天疑是春, Red plum blossoms filled the sky and I wondered if it's spring time yet.
白雪紛飛眼前冬, White snow flying profusely before me I cannot deny it's still winter.
苦酒獨酌難免愁, Bitter is the wine as I pour alone in sorrow which I cannot escape.
霎時人間一塲夢. How quickly a life time becomes a dream...
Your poem is excellent already. I cant help rewriting it.
紅梅滿布春來到，
白雪紛飛冬未消。
苦酒獨酌欲澆愁，
人間一夢不過游。
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紅梅滿天疑是春, Red plum blossoms filled the sky and I wondered if it's spring time yet.
白雪紛飛眼前冬, White snow flying profusely before me I cannot deny it's still winter.
苦酒獨酌難免愁, Bitter is the wine as I pour alone in sorrow which I cannot escape.
霎時人間一塲夢. How quickly a life time becomes a dream...
愁: something that I worry, but this worry sometimes is not needed (?), or just worry nothing.
霎時人間一塲夢: an instant dream, (a) life
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good job！
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@Streetman: This is what I call poetic licence! :) To tell the truth I have never seen plum blossoms blooming in my life!
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满天 :
I dont think red plum blossoms are in the sky,哈哈，how about " in full bloom" or "from place to place"?
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