Short letter Hey Sam, I have a question: were you in Budapest today? :) Me and my smaller sister were going down the escalator on the underground M2, and I spotted you on the other escalator going up

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Esther

Short letter Hey Sam, I have a question: were you in Budapest today? :) Me and my smaller sister were going down the escalator on the underground M2, and I spotted you on the other escalator going upwards. (You were also looking at us, but I guess you don’t remember us.) I didn’t know from where I knew you, but I was sure that I have already seen you somewhere on TV or YouTube. Then, I realised I saw you in a video about TC syndrome, and I am pretty sure that it was you, because of your unique tattoos. I wrote you because something heartwarming happened to me. My sister (12 yrs old) said to me: „Look, he has such a lovely nice face.” I cannot translate exactly what she said in Hungarian, because our language is sooo diverse, but I was so proud, because she always sees the good things in people. Maybe this short story is as heartwarming to you like to me. I hope you enjoyed our beautiful Budapest. Best wishes, Eszter

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Hey Sam,

I have a question: were you in Budapest today? :) Me and My smaller younger sister and I (<--"Smaller" is used for size, and younger is used for age. Also, always write the other person first before yourself.)were going down the escalator on the underground M2, and I spotted you on the other escalator going upwards. (You were also looking at us, but I guess you don’t didn't remember us.) I didn’t know from where I knew you, but I was sure that I have had already seen you somewhere on TV or YouTube. Then, I realised that I saw you in a video about TC syndrome, and I am pretty sure that it was you because of your unique tattoos.
I wrote am writing to you because something heartwarming happened to me. My sister (12 yrs twelve years old) said to me: "Look, he has such a nice, lovely nice face.” I cannot translate exactly what she said in Hungarian, because our language is sooo diverse, but I was so proud, because she always sees the good things traits (<--Avoid using "things" as much as possible; it's a very vague word that doesn't specify anything.) in people.
Maybe this short story is as heartwarming to you like as it is to me.
I hope you enjoyed our beautiful Budapest.

Best wishes,
Eszter

Very nicely written, Eszter! Your English is strong! Please let me know if you have any questions about my corrections and notes =)

Hey Sam,

I have a question: were you in Budapest today? :) Me and my smaller sister were going down the escalator on the underground M2, and I spotted you on the other escalator going upwards. (You were also looking at us, but I guess you don’t remember us.) I didn’t recall know from where I knew you from, but I was sure that I have already seen you somewhere on TV or YouTube. Then, I realised I saw you in a video about TC syndrome, and I am pretty sure that it was you, because of your unique tattoos :).

I wrote you because something heartwarming happened to me. My sister (12 yrs old) said to me: „Look, he has such a lovely nice face.” I cannot translate exactly what she said in Hungarian, because our language is sooo diverse, but I was so proud, because she always sees the good things in people.
Maybe this short story is as heartwarming to you like to me.
Anyway I hope you enjoyed our beautiful Budapest.
Best wishes,
Eszter

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