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*Ibsen’s feministic plays was popularized not only in the western world but also Asia before the World Wars, and they encouraged the women to go for the feminist movement in order to change the unequal treatments for women. Although the concept of gender equality is common in most of the countries, including the United States, sexism is still considered as a global issue today. Therefore, reading Ibsen’s feminist plays is crucial for today’s society to truly understand about the society.
*His introduction of striking female characters into his work fascinated the Norwegian Society for Women’s Rights, and they applauds him on the occasion of his seventieth birthday in 1898.
*The “problem of women”, which he claimed that he desired to solve, is one of the central themes of his plays.
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Hi! I have a few sentences that I want you to look at!
Hello! I have a few sentences that I want you to look at. I am not sure if those these sentences are grammatically correct.Thank you for helping me!
*Ibsen’s feministic plays was were popularized not only in the western world but also in Asia before the World Wars, and they encouraged the women of the time to go for take part in [or, to identify themselves with] the feminist movement in order to change the unequal treatments for of women. Although the concept of gender equality is common accepted in most of the countries, including the United States, sexism is still considered as to be a global issue today. Therefore, reading Ibsen’s feminist plays is crucial for today’s society to truly understand about the society this issue in its historical context.
*His introduction of striking female characters into his work fascinated the Norwegian Society for Women’s Rights, and they applauds applauded him on the occasion of his seventieth birthday in 1898.
*The “problem of women”, which he claimed that he desired to solve, is one of the central themes of his plays.
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His introduction of striking female characters into his work [I don't understand this part of the sentence. Perhaps you mean to say,
His introductory works, which feature striking female characters...]
striking [adjective] = impressive
striking [verb in the present continuous tense] = to hit, or hitting. Sometimes this means to place something, in a dramatic way, e.g. "He was striking his cards down on the table"
So, I don't know if you mean "He introduces striking (impressive) women into his plays", or "He strikes (puts) women into his plays"
Nice work overall. You were able to write about a complicated topic in English, and most of it made sense.
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