moving
Right now is raining here where I live. I like this weather, is perfect to read a book, listen to music and other things.
I moved to the city center two months ago and to be honest this is totally different from the place where I used to live. Here people are more stressed(maybe because this is the city). But well, I moved here because in the city there are more opportunities to get a job. My friends think that I'm constantly moving from one place to another, because when I was 18 I started to study at college and I moved to another state, I mean, I started living on my own, without my parents, and then, when I finished my studies I moved to another state. I visit my parents just on holidays by the way. I like the idea of living in different places, because you can meet other people, other cultures, even in my own country there are different cultures. Have you ever heard about fleeting people? Well, I consider myself as one, and I have met some fleeting people as well. For example, in my job, I met a person who was my trainer, he was very kind and patient and friendly. But he recently moved to another place, so he is not working with us anymore. The thing is that I met him and we got along well together, maybe I'm not going to see him anymore, but in any case, I'm going to keep a good impression of him. And that's the interesting fact of fleeting people, you meet people for a while, and you learn from them. Maybe something good or bad, maybe they can change your life, or maybe not, but in any case you learn from them. And well, "rewinding", In the future I'd like to work in another country.
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Right now it is raining here where I live. I like this weather, it is perfect to read a book, listen to music and or do other things.I moved to the city center two months ago and to be honest, this is it is totally different here from the place where I used to live. Here people are more stressed (maybe because this is the city). But, I moved here because in the city there are more opportunities to get a job in the city. My friends think that I'm constantly moving from one place to another, because when I was 18 I started to study at college and I moved to another state. I mean to say, I started living on my own without my parents, and then, when I finished my studies, I moved to another state. By the way, I only visit my parents just on the holidays by the way. I like the idea of living in different places, because you can meet other people, other cultures; even in my own country there are different cultures. Have you ever heard about fleeting people? Well, I consider myself as one, and I have met some fleeting people as well. For example, in my job, I met a person who was my trainer; he was very kind and patient and friendly. But, he recently moved to another place, so he is not working with us anymore. The thing is that I met him and we got along well together, maybe I'm not going to see him anymore, but in any case, I'm going to keep a good impression of him. And that's the interesting fact of fleeting people, you meet people for a while, and you learn from them. Maybe something good or bad, maybe they can change your life, or maybe not, but in any case you learn from them. And well, "rewinding", In the future I'd like to work in another country.
Hi Claudia, great job! There were just a few instances where you needed a subject pronoun. The other corrections I made were mainly to rearrange the order of certain phrasing to be more like a native speaker. That's not to say that it was wrong, but smoother as seen above. No estoy seguro lo que quieres decir con la palabra 'fleeting?' Quizás, 'flighty' sería mejor. Pero, ¡Bien hecho! ¡Que tengas una buena noche! -Nathan
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