What an awful day!
It was my first day to work, and I screwed everything up! My friend laughed at me: "you are not lazy, only too stupid". You want to know why? Ok, fine, I went to the wrong address and unfortunately, there was a new guy onboarding in that company too. And, we have the same name! So I was regarded as him, trained as him and when he showed up, I found my mistake!
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What an awful day!
It was my first day at work, and I screwed everything up! My friend laughed at me, "you are not lazy, only stupid". You want to know why? Ok, fine. I went to the wrong address and unfortunately, there was a new guy starting in that company too. And, we have the same name! So I was regarded as him, trained as him and when he showed up, I noticed my mistake!This was very good and well written! It's just a few minor details like word preference & tiny grammatical tweaks. But other than that this was really great! Good job!
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What an awful day!
It was my first day at work, and I screwed everything up! My friend laughed at me: "You are not lazy, only stupid". You want to know why? Ok, fine, I went to the wrong address and unfortunately, there was a new guy onboarding in that company too. And, we have the same name! So I was regarded as him, trained as him and when he showed up, I discovered my mistake!Hello Lingfeng,
It may seem important now but in the future you will be able to look back at this situation and laugh about it! It wasn't just your mistake the company that 'trained' you also screwed up!
Just a couple of very small corrections, nice work.
Bob
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