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Dear Sir/Madam,
I`m writing to complain about my travel from London to Glasgow by your train. Unfortunately the train was delayed and I was great inconvenience when I went to business meeting.
Your staff was unhelpful. Moreover, they are refuse to give explanation for their delay and unable to make other arrangements.
I was hungry for most of journey, because your buffet car was closed all time. I cought buy anything to eat or drink.
I am waiting for your answer and apology.
Yours faithfully, Marya.
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Dear Sir/Madam,I`m writing to complain about my trip from London to Glasgow by your train. Unfortunately the train was delayed and I was greatly inconvenienced by you when I arrived late to my business meeting.
Your staff was unhelpful. Moreover, they all refused to give an explanation for their delay and were unable to make other arrangements for me.
I was hungry for most of the journey, because your buffet car was closed the entire time. I couldn't buy anything to eat or drink.
I am waiting for your answer and apology.
Yours faithfully,
Marya.
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Dear Sir/Madam,I`m writing to complain about my travel journey from London to Glasgow by your train. Unfortunately the train was delayed and I it was a great inconvenience when I went as I was going to a business meeting.
Your staff was were unhelpful. Moreover, they are refused to give an explanation for their delay and were unable to make other arrangements for me.
I was hungry for most of the journey, because your buffet car was closed all the whole time. I cought couldn't buy anything to eat or drink.
I am waiting for await your answer and apology.
Yours faithfully sincerely, Marya.
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