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News Translation News Translation Japanese Prime Minister Shinzo Abe sent a video to a meeting held in Tokyo by citizens aiming to amend the Constitution. In it, he said he intends to amend the Constitution and make it active in 2020. He also cited concrete amendment such as adding a provision about the Self-Defence Force to the war renouncing article 9, and making higher education free of charge. 安倍総理大臣は、東京都内で開かれた憲法改正を目指す市民らの会合に寄せたビデオメッセージの中で、憲法を改正し2020年の施行を目指す意向を表明しました。また具体的な改正項目として、戦争の放棄などを定めた憲法9条に、自衛隊に関する条文を追加するほか、高等教育の無償化などを例示しました。

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News Translation
Japanese Prime Minister Shinzo Abe sent a video to a meeting held in Tokyo by citizens aiming to amend the Constitution. In it, he said he intends to amend the Constitution and make the amendments active in 2020. He also cited concrete amendments such as adding a provision for a  Self-Defence Force to article 9 which renounces war, and making higher education free of charge.

安倍総理大臣は、東京都内で開かれた憲法改正を目指す市民らの会合に寄せたビデオメッセージの中で、憲法を改正し2020年の施行を目指す意向を表明しました。また具体的な改正項目として、戦争の放棄などを定めた憲法9条に、自衛隊に関する条文を追加するほか、高等教育の無償化などを例示しました。
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Japanese Prime Minister Shinzo Abe sent a video appeared via video to a meeting held in Tokyo by citizens aiming to amend the Constitution. In it, he said he intends to amend the Constitution and make it active in 2020. He also cited concrete amendments such as adding a provision allowing the Self-Defence Force to the be sent to war, renouncing article 9, and making higher education free of charge.

安倍総理大臣は、東京都内で開かれた憲法改正を目指す市民らの会合に寄せたビデオメッセージの中で、憲法を改正し2020年の施行を目指す意向を表明しました。また具体的な改正項目として、戦争の放棄などを定めた憲法9条に、自衛隊に関する条文を追加するほか、高等教育の無償化などを例示しました。


Great work!  I only made a few changes to use common English phrasing.

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You are welcome. I also learn a lot from your translation.
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Thank you! your comment was very informative. There is no organization such as "憲法を目指す市民らの会合". So they don't have to be capital letters.
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I'd like to comment on the first sentence. (1) My try is: Japanese Prime Minister Shinzo Abe announced in a video message for a meeting held in Tokyo by "Citizens Aiming to Amend the Constitution." (2) Is the formal English title of the organization, "憲法改正を目指す市民らの会合" "Citizens Aiming to Amend the Constitution?" (Thank you once again for correcting my Japanese Notebook.)

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