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Is it okay? Hi there folks, I am Carlos Antonio and I am 22. I was born in June 4 and I studied In Comuneros. I am an easy going person and I don't worry alot about problems unless they have solution. I started working with my dad since I was a child, from the age of 10 I guess so I used to sell gasoline on the streets and I also worked in construction with my brother. On 2016 I was in my granny's house and my uncle came in and he said to me something like "Hey Carlos, Who Are you gonna be? What are your goals? and those questions made me think about my life so I answered to him as honest as I could and I said to him"Tio, no se que hacer con mi vida" I thought about it for a while and then I heard a friend of mine talking about SENA and I decided to check it out and it got into it. I am so happy now that I decided to change my life 'cause now I feel much better and my life has a purpose .If you wanna know something else about me, don't hesitate in ask me, just shoot and I am gonna try to come back to you asap

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Is it okay?

Hi there!  folks, This is too folks/casual.  I am  My name is Carlos Antonio and I am twenty-two22. I was born in Too many sentences with the same structures and so this becomes boring.  Try to vary and your piece will become more interesting.  My birthday is on June 4 and I studied In at Comuneros. I am an easy going person and I don't worry alot about problems unless they have  without a solution. I started working with for my dad You are adult now.  Try not to have baby talk unless it is used as a term of endearment.  father since I was a child, from at the age of ten 10 Spell out all simple numbers. I guess so I used to sell gasoline on the streets and I also worked in the construction business with my brother. On Then one day in 2016 while I was staying/living in my granny's grandmother's house, and my uncle came in and he said to me something like on the lines of,


"Hey Carlos! Who are you gonna be? What are your goals?"

If you like my more formal style, I shall continue then...


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Is it okay?

Hi there folks, I am Carlos Antonio and I am 22. I was born in June 4 and I studied In Comuneros. I am an easy going person and I don't worry a lot about problems unless they don't have a solution. I started working with my Dad when I was a child, from the age of 10 I guess. I used to sell gasoline on the streets and I also worked in construction with my brother. In 2016 I was in my Granny's house and my uncle came in and he said to me something like "Hey Carlos, Who Are you gonna be? What are your goals? and those questions made me think about my life so I answered to him as honestly as I could and I said to him"Tio, no se que hacer con mi vida" I thought about it for a while and then I heard a friend of mine talking about SENA and I decided to check it out and I got into it. I am so happy now that I decided to change my life 'cause now I feel much better and my life has a purpose .If you wanna know something else about me, don't hesitate in ask me, just shoot and I am gonna try to come back to you asap
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SERVICIO NACIONAL DE APRENDIZAJE It's a free kind of University where only smart people go (I say smart becasue you have to go throught a procces and you have to be in the top 30 best ones to get into it) many people try to get in but many can't because they don't give the correct answers or maybe they fail in the interview. In the university you study 4, 5 or even more years but in SENA you could either study 1 or 2 years. Hope it helps :)
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what is SENA?

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