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Phone I want to buy a new phone,I feel use this one is trouble.But, I, I haven't enough, money money.So I must, wait.Until, my summer holiday.I will fine a part time job.If I have new phone,My study will come, convenient.So I want to my summer holiday.Fast to come.

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I want to buy a new phone.  I feel useing this one is too much trouble.But, I, I haven't enough, money, money. (Its not common in English to repeat words like this, and its only okay in spoken English.)So I must, wait until, my summer holiday.I will find a part time job.If I have a new phone, my study will become, convenient.So I want to my summer holiday.Fast to come fast/quickly.


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