My Dog!
I have a lovely dog called Charlie who is very beautiful and rowdy. haha
I adopted it when I had 18 years old, since then we are beast friends, we walk around neighborhood, play together a lot.
It is very important for me, I love it so much! A lot of times when I was a little sad It stayed with me all the time.
So, this is Charlie!
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My Dog!
I have a lovely dog called named Charlie who is very beautiful and rowdy. Haha.I adopted it when I had 18 was eighteen-years-old. Since then, we are have been best (<--Be careful. "Beast" means "fera," while "best" means "melhor.") friends; we walk around neighborhood and play together a lot.
It He is very important for me, and I love it him so much! A lot of Many (<--"Many" sounds better than "a lot" in this context) times, when I was a little sad, It he always stayed with me all the time.
So, This is Charlie!
Charlie looks adorable, Bruna! You are very lucky to have him. Your English is also very good, and I hope my corrections help. Please feel free to ask me any questions you may have =)
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