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Like Penguin! Yesterday I helped my sister with her move. She lived in an apartment in fourth floor, no elevator, only stairs. I had to go up and go down again and again carrying bags and boxes till we put everything in the truck. So, today I'm nobody. My legs muscles is hurting and my shoulders too. I feel that I don't have flexibility in my legs anymore. They're stiff. I'm walking like a penguin: waddling. For my luck, her new apartment has elevator, so to unload her move was easier than to carry. Now, I want only to rest.

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Like Penguin!

Yesterday I helped my sister with her move. She lived in an apartment in fourth floor, no elevator, only stairs. I had to go up and go down again and again carrying bags and boxes till we put everything in the truck. So, today I'm nobody  (I don't think that it is a right phrase to express your exhaustion but I duno the right one). My legs muscles is hurting and my shoulders too (My legs' muscles and shoulder hurts. I feel that I don't have flexibility in my legs anymore (lost flexibility of my legs). They're stiff. I'm walking like a penguin: waddling.
For my luck, her new apartment has elevator, so to unload her move was easier than to carry. Now, I just want only to rest.
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Like A Penguin!

Yesterday, I helped my sister with her move. She lived in an apartment in on the fourth floor. There was no elevator, only stairs. I had to go up and go down again and again, carrying bags and boxes 'till we put everything was in the truck. So, today Now, I'm nobody I feel like death... My legs muscles is are hurting and my shoulders are, too. I feel that like I don't have flexibility in my legs anymore... They're stiff! I'm walking like a penguin: waddling.
For my Luckily, her new apartment has an elevator, so to unload her moving her in was much easier than moving her out to carry. Now, all I want only to do is rest.


Excellent composition, Kellen! You have very few errors. :) We shall go over my corrections during our next tutoring session. Keep up the great work! I hope you feel better soon. Maybe you can relax with a book and a cup of tea? :)


Kindest regards,


Josh

italki Community English Tutor

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Walking like a penguin!

Yesterday I helped my sister moved her stuffs into her new apartment. with her move. Since she was previously living in an apartment on the  in fourth floor in a building that has no elevator, only just stairs, I had to go up and go down those stairs many times in order to carry again and again all her stuffs / bags and boxes/ to a truck waiting below.  till we put everything in the truck. That is why  today I am  feeling so worn out. nobody. My legs muscles are aching hurting and so are my shoulders. too. I feel that My legs have tightened  up, and they are so stiff now. . I don't have flexibility in my legs anymore. They're stiff. So much so, whenever I walk, I walk with a waddle , just like a penguin would. I'm walking like a penguin: waddling.
For my luck, Luckily for me, her new apartment has elevators, so the unloading of her stuff into her new place to unload her move was so much easier than carrying them down the stairs  at her previous place earlier.. to carry. Now, I just want only to rest.

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