It will be my first time to see the sea :)
I haven't had an opportunity to see the sea since I was born, because the places where I have lived are far away from the sea. But in about a month that my sister and I are going to go to a coastal city named Rizhao to see the sea during the Dragon Boat Festival. I am really looking forward to the trip, though there are still 27 days before the arrival of that traditional festival.
Two years, or even more, passed in a blur. I remember when I was a senior student, my best friends at that time and I once planned to see the beach together; we were so excited that I still easily recall the look in my friends' eyes. However, ultimately, we failed, and we were so disappointed at that time.
One month later, it will be my first time to see the sea. Maybe the sea won't look like what I had always imagined in my mind more than a thousand times when I was a child, but I still have the same child-like anticipation as an adult as I had a kid. My strong desires about the sea make me feel that I am still that little girl and my friends never came away.
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It will be my first time to see watch the sea :)
I haven't got an opportunity to see the sea since I was born, because the places that where I have ever lived in are far away from the sea. But now, one chance comes: it will be in about one month later that my sister and I are will be going to go to a coastal city named Rizhao to see watch the sea during the following next Dragon Boat Festival. I am really looking forward to my trip, though there are still 27 days long before the arrival of that traditional festival comes.Two years or even more years have passed in a blur. I remember when I was a senior student, my best friends at that time and I once, planned to see the beach together; we were so excited that I still easily recall the eyes of my friends that were full of expectation. However, ultimately, we failed.
One In a month later, it will be my the first time that I will to see the sea. Maybe the sea won't be looked like what I had imagined in my mind for a thousands times when I was a child, but as a grown-up, it's even now that I still cannot wait to see watch it. My strong desires about for the sea makes me feel that I am still that little girl and my friends never came away.
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It will be my first time to see the sea :)
I haven't had an opportunity to see the sea since I was born, because the places where I have ever lived in are far away from the sea. But now is my chance: it will be in about one month's time that my sister and I are going to go to a coastal city named Rizhao to see the sea during the following Dragon Boat Festival. I am really looking forward to my trip, though there are still 27 days long before the traditional festival comes.Two years, or even more, years passed in a blur. I remember once when I was a senior student, I planned to see the beach together with my best friends at that time. We were so excited that I still easily recall how my friend's eyes that were full of expectation. However, ultimately, our plans fell through.
One month later, it will be my first time to see the sea. Maybe the sea won't be looked like what I had imagined in my mind for thousands of times when I was a child but, even now, as a grown-up, it's even now that I still cannot wait to see it. My strong desires about the sea make me feel as though I still am that little girl and my friends never left.
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It will be my first time to see the sea :)
I haven't had an opportunity to see the sea since I was a kid, because the places where I have lived are far away from the sea(You can also say: because I haven't lived any places near there since then.). But in about a month, my sister and I are going to go to the coastal city of Rizhao to see the sea during the Dragon Boat Festival. I am really looking forward to the trip, though there are still 27 days away before the arrival of that traditional festival. (Willow: You don't need this part since the story isn't about the festival.)Two years ago, when I was a senior in highschool, my best friends at that time and I (had) planned to see the beach together; we were so excited that I still remember the look in her eyes. (Willow: Since you already wrote that you felt excited, you don't have to describe the look again.) She was so disappointed when we were unable to go.
But this time, I will get to see the sea without her. Maybe the sea won't look like how I had always imagined more than a thousands times when I was a kid. I still have the same child-like anticipation as an adult as I had as a kid. My strong desires about the sea takes me back to my childhood when I had the feelings that me and my friends will always be together. Come hell or high water (无论困难多大), I will finally see the great blue sea.
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It will be my first time seeing the sea :)
I haven't had an opportunity to see the sea since I was born, because all the places where I have ever lived in since thenTwo years or
One month later, it will be my first time to see the sea.> In another month time, I will see the sea for the first time / When I am there a month from now, it will be my first time seeing the sea.
Maybe the sea won't be looked like what I had imagined thousands of time in my mind for thousands times when I was a child. > like what I had visualized in my mind thousands of time when ....
However, as a grown-up as I am now, it's even now that I still cannot wait to see it. My long-lasting yet strong desire to see about the sea make me feel that I am still that little girl who once tried to visit the seaside with and my friends. never came away.
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