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2017/04/30 We have a big week nemad "Golden Week" in Japan. Now, a lots of Japanese are having days off(maximum for 9 days...!) Because there are some public holidays continuously. It was just awesome when I was a student, but now I have work, so it doesn't matter to me... that's so sad. A lots of Japanese are having like vacation now but there are lots of people who works as well(like me) even though we have public holidays. Anyway, I will go to Tsukiji or Yokohama next my day off. It must be crowded though...but I want to go. Thanks for reading, if you find any mistakes then please improve it.

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2017/04/30 We have a big week named/called "Golden Week" in Japan.

Now, a lots of Japanese are having days off(maximum for 9 days...!), because there are some public holidays continuouslythat occur in a row. ("a" is with singular so "a lot of" or "lots of".  You could also say "have days off" instead of "are having days off".  "because" has to be part of the same sentence of what it explains.  So "Because I like cookies, I baked some" or "I baked some cookies because I wanted to eat cookies."  You cannot do クッキーをすきですので。 in English.  It has to be part of the same sentence.  "continuously" is a little strange.  "several public holidays in a row" is better.)
It was just awesome when I was a student, but now I have work, so it doesn't matter to me... that's so sad. A lots of Japanese are having like vacation now but there are lots of people who works as well(like me) even though we have public holidays.("like" is occasionally used the way you used it here in slang.  For instance "Like, I like totally went to like the ends of the earth to buy this Gucci purse."  This is NOT good English but is sometimes in TV shows or spoken.  If you instead wanted to say that many Japanese are having vacation like the way you used to have vacation when you were a student, then "A lot of Japanese are having similar vacations (to my student vacations) now but..."  "like" is used in "That dog looks like a horse."  "That dog is like a horse" or "I like dogs". "similar to" is more formal for these than "like" You could say "Going to the movies is like having a vacation.")
Anyway, I will go to Tsukiji or Yokohama on next my next day off. It must/will be crowded though...but I want to go. ("will" emphasizes that it will be crowded when you are there, whereas "must" implies more that it is continuously crowded, now, and when you go)

Thanks for reading, if you find any mistakes then please improve it.
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My major is not English , and l couldn't find any mistakes, but l am glad to know the recent activity aournd Japan, in China, we have vacation as well, but not for long, many of us choose to travel, like you., there was a sentence which is the reason a young female teacher choose to give her job up, translate to English , is that "this world is very big, l want to see it." maybe you have the same free souls just like hers

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