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About my Indian life I write about my Indian life. It's basically hot in India,but I feel comparatively comfortable for low humidity in city of Bangalore where I live in. It's very hard for me that I can't get Japanese food. Because Indian main food is vegetables and I feel too spicy. Recently I'm enjoying watching cricket game on TV,though I don't know cricket rules. インドの生活について書きます。 インドの気候は基本的にずっと暑いですが、私の住んでいるバンガロールは湿度が低く比較的過ごしやすいです。 食事は野菜が中心で辛いものが多く、日本食が手に入らないのはとてもつらいです。 ルールはほとんど分かりませんが、テレビでクリケットの試合を見るのが最近の楽しみです。

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 I am writing about my life in India.  It is basically hot here but I feel comparatively comfortable due to low humidity in the city of Bangalore here where I live. It's hard on me because I cannot buy Japanese food here. Indian food is mainly spicy vegetables , Too spicy!  Recently I have been enjoying watching cricket games on TV however I do not know the cricket rules.










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About my life in India

I will write about my life in India.
In general, India is hot, but I feel comparatively comfortable because of the low humidity in the city of Bangalore where I live in.
It's very hard for me that I can't get Japanese food, because Indian food is mainly vegetables and I feel it is too spicy.
Recently I've been enjoying watching cricket games on TV, though I don't know the rules of cricket.


yellow = less important correction あまり重要ではない訂正「別に間違ってないんですけど、この方がいいと思います」
orange = very important correction 文法的に重要な訂正

"It's basically hot" isn't wrong, but I think "In general, India is hot" is closer to what you're trying to say in Japanese.
「It's basically hot」は間違ってないんですが、日本語の翻訳によると多分「In general, India is hot」の方が正確です。

Don't forget spaces after commas!
コンマの後にスペースを絶対に入れるべきです！

In general, good job! :) I've never been to India, so it was interesting to read about!

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