Brother at hospital
Today I woke up at 06:50 AM, my brother was vomiting and my mother told me that we need to pick up him to the hospital. I put on my clothes, ate an apple and went to the car with him. Ten minutes after I arrived at the hospital, the doctor prescribed some medicines, and a lot of water. Later, at home, he took him medicines and has improved a lot. Now, we are observing if he have any relapse.
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Brother at hospital
Today I woke up at 06:50 AM, my brother was vomiting and my mother told me that we need to pick up him from the hospital. I put on my clothes, ate an apple and went to the car with her. Ten minutes after I arrived at the hospital, the doctor prescribed some medicines, and a lot of water. Later, at home, he took him medicines and has improved a lot. Now, we are observing him to see if he has a relapse.Good job!
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Brother at the hospital
Today, I woke up at 06:50 AM. My brother was vomiting, and my mother told me that we needed to bring him to the hospital. I put on my clothes, ate an apple, and got into the car with him. Ten minutes after I arrived at the hospital, the doctor prescribed some medicine and told him to drink a lot of water. Later, at home, he took his medicine and has improved a lot. Now, we are observing if he has a relapse.Want to progress faster?
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