My first diary. This is my first diary,and my first post. Today , I went to school. I had 3 classes. First class was electromagnetism-first-practice.In this class, I solved some questions. These quest

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My first diary. This is my first diary,and my first post. Today , I went to school. I had 3 classes. First class was electromagnetism-first-practice.In this class, I solved some questions. These questions were a little difficult for me, but we could read textbook. So, I could solve these questions. Second class was complex function theory. It was a kind of math. Although our teacher wrote on the black board, his description was very complicated. After his description, we had a small test. There were 5 questions, but I could solve only 3 questions. Because, it was too short time for me to solve such difficult question. Third class was differential equation. This class' teacher was very funny. His way to speak was very characteristic. I was very surprised in the first class. Now I accustomed it. After school, I went to part-time job. I'm working in the "Izakaya". Izakaya means Japanese pub. So I went back home at 22:30 pm. Now I'm very sleepy. But I can sleep by 9:00 am. That means I can sleep for 8 hours, I wanna improve my English skill. So I decide to write diary in English as many as possible. Thank you for reading my first diary. It will be very glad for me if you touch up this sentence. Good night.

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My first diary.

This is my first diary and my first post. Today I went to school and had 3 classes. The first class was electromagnetism-first-practice, in this class I solved some questions. These questions were a little difficult for me, but we could a read textbook so I could solve them. The second class I had was complex function theory, It's a type of math. Even though our teacher wrote on the black board his description was very complicated. After his description we had a small test, there was five questions but I could only solve three of them. because there was not enough time for me to solve such difficult questions. The third class was differential equation this class' teacher was very funny. His way of speaking was very characteristic. I was very surprised at first but now I'm accustomed it.

After school, I went to my part-time job. I work at an "Izakaya" which means Japanese pub. I got
back home at 22:30 pm. I'm very sleepy but I can sleep until 9:00am which means I can sleep for 8 hours.

I want to improve my English skills so I decided to write a diary in English as many as possible.
Thank you for reading my first diary I would be very glad if you can touch up this sentence,
Good night.

As Katherine's already mentioned is it's better to write the whole number out but I wouldn't worry about that too much. I would say to work on the use of full stops and commas, try reading your work out loud and whenever you need to take a short breath that's where the comma should go and whenever you need to take a long breath is where the full stops should go. You can also use words such as "and" instead of a comma as these have the same effect. Hopefully this makes sense

It's very good so keep it up! :)

My first diary.

This is my first diary, and my first post. Today, I went to school. I had three classes. First class was electromagnetism-first-practice. In this class, I solved some questions. These questions were a little difficult for me, but we could read our textbook. So, I could solve these questions. Second class was complex function theory. It's a type of math. Although our teacher wrote on the black board, his description was very complicated. After his description, we had a small test. There were five questions, but I could solve only three questions. It was too short of a time for me to solve such difficult question. Third class was differential equation. This class' teacher was very funny. His way of speaking was very characteristic. I was very surprised at first, but now I am accustomed to it.

After school, I went to my part-time job. I work at an "Izakaya". "Izakaya" means Japanese pub.
So, I went back home at 22:30 PM. Now, I'm very sleepy. But, I can sleep until 9:00 am. That means I can sleep for eight hours.

I wanna improve my English skill. So, I have decided to write a diary in English as much as possible.
Thank you for reading my first diary. I would be very glad if you touch up this sentence.
Good night.

You are doing an amazing job! You get your main points across very well. The main issue I would focus on if I were you would be using commas correctly in a statement, along with refining the sentences you already have. A good tip would be if a number is 1-15, you should type out the number as a word instead of using it's number form. (One, two, three is better than 1, 2, 3, but 16,17,18 is okay.) This isn't an actually "rule," but it is good to keep in mind. I think you're amazing at English, just keep up the good work. :)

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