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What I did today What I did today Today I woke up at 08.30 more or less. The first I do when I'm awake is have a breakfast. Normally my breakfast consist of taking a cup of coffee and slice of bread. (I'm not addicted to taking coffee but I love it, I need always take some it to be really awake and have energy). The second one, immediately when I finished my breakfast I go quickly to have a shower and then dressing up. When I'm ready to go, I just have to catch every things that I need: like handbag or my folder, without forgetting check that there's inside every important documents. When is all right, I go out to the office. (I’m lawyer and I'm working in a law firm). I live in the capital of my city where is so easy go walking from my home. I usually go walking, but sometimes (when I'm later) I can taking a bus to the office. Normally I have to stay at the office between 09.30/10.00 (maybe previously some days when I have any meetings with customers or with my boss). My timetable is depend of the day: sometimes I cannot come back at home to the meals and I have to take something there. Fortunately I have a flexible schedule, even some days I can work from home ( Not as frequent as I would like, because my boss is not really happy with this because he said that you could lose any document) Today was a lucky day because I could be back at home early and having a free time!!! I went out to running in a park close to home (2 hours ago, approximately) Then I came back again at home and I had a relaxing shower. Tomorrow I must be a hard day because of having a “guard service” like lawyer (I don't know how is in English). That's all! I just wanted to write something and continue improving my English.

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What I did today

What I did today
Today I woke up at 08.30 more or less. The first thing I do when I'm awake is have a breakfast. Normally my breakfast consists of taking (better: having) a cup of coffee and slice of bread. (I'm not addicted to taking having coffee but I love it, I need to always take have some it to be really awake and have energy).
The second one thing, immediately when I finished my breakfast (better: Next, immediately after finishing breakfast) I go quickly to have a shower and then dressing up get dressed.
When I'm ready to go, I just have to catch everythings that I need: like my handbag or my folder, without forgetting to check that there's inside every important documents is inside (or is there).
When everything is all right, I go out to the office. (I’m a lawyer and I'm working (better: I work) in a law firm).
I live in the capital of my city where it's so easy go walking from my home. I usually go walking, but sometimes (when I'm later) I can taking take a bus to the office.
Normally I have to stay arrive at the office between 09.30/10.00 (maybe previously earlier some days when I have any meetings with customers or with my boss).
My timetable is dependent on of the day (or depends on the day): sometimes I cannot come back at home to the for meals and I have to take something there. Fortunately I have a flexible schedule, even some days I can work from home ( Not as frequently as I would like, because my boss is not really happy with this because he said that you could lose any document)
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Today was a lucky day because I could be back at home early and having a have some free time!!! 
I went out to running (or I went out to run) in a park close to home (2 hours ago, approximately) 
Then I came back again at home again and I had a relaxing shower. 
Tomorrow I must will be a hard day because I'm on call of having a “guard service” like lawyer. 

That's all! I just wanted to write something and continue improving my English.


Well done Cristina! My corrections are in red and my suggestions to sound more natural are in blue and grey.

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