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In a pharmacy This is a conversation between a pharmacist (A) and a customer(B). The custumer has dry skin and spots. A: hello, can I help you? Do you want some information? B: hello, I need a day beauty cream, and a serum for the nights. A: what type of skin do you have? B: I have dry skin but in the nose zone I have boils and spots. A: ohh, I see, you need a cream with vitamin C for your spots, and in the night you must put hialuronic serum for the wrinkles.

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Hello! Veery good but I would make the following changes.

In a pharmacy

This is a conversation between a pharmacist (A) and a customer(B). The customer has dry skin and spots.


A: hello, can I help you? Would you want some information? (this sounds more polite than "do you")
B: hello, I need a day beauty cream, and a serum for night.
A: what type of skin do you have?
B: I have dry skin but on my nose zone  (you could say t-zone, nose and above eyebrows, or just say on my nose)I have boils and spots (I think you mean pimples (US English, or spots (UK English). Note: boils are very bad, people don't usually have these on their face.
A: ohh, I see, you need a cream with vitamin C for your spots, and for the night you should use  hyaluronic serum for wrinkles.

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In a pharmacy

This is a conversation between a pharmacist (A) and a customer (B). The customer has dry skin and spots.

A: Hello, (<--Capitalize the first word in a dialogue.) can I help you? Do you want some information?
B: Hello, I need a day beauty cream for daytime and a serum for the nights.
A: What type of skin do you have?
B: I have dry skin, but in the nose zone area, (<--We don't say "nose zone.") I have boils and spots.
A: Ohh, I see. You need a cream with vitamin C for your spots, and in the at night, you must put apply hialuronic serum for the wrinkles.

Buen trabajo, Elena. Please feel free to ask me if you have any questions. ¡Saludos! =)

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